Wonderful Story !
But just One chapter ?
Why do your stories have to end ?.....

definitely one of the betters you've written in awhile! not that i haven't like your past stories. this one just happens to be better!

i hope they admit they love each other soon and i really hope miss weasley gets what's coming to her and i hope there's a child on the way!

Sigh - I do so love my Harmony, so I am sad that there are only two more chappies to go. I only ask that you will not let that awful Miss Weasley create a misunderstanding or rift between our loving couple!! I also enjoyed the Marauders' moments - the dynamic between them even through the painting was wonderful! Thanks so much for a great chapter! I look forward to reading the final two chapters, especially since I am hoping that Harry and Hermione will be blessed with children and a family beyond their wildest dream! Keep up the fabulous writing!!

I can understand both Harry and Hermione's point of view. Even better was that despite the disagreement they were able to see each others viewpoint as well. It's funny how you can tell so easily that they love each other from their actions, even Remus can see it yet they are to blind to see it themselves. I can't wait to they figure it out.

He was becoming an exercise in illogic, he thought with some exasperation.

So does Harry love Hermione, or is he just screwing her? It's actually kind of mean...if you think about it...

I love this story...only 2 more chapters??? I am so disappointed. Can't this be an epic story???

wow... great chapter... i loved remus talking to lily and james... i think harry would like to hear that memory of remus' from the night james told him he was going to marry lily...

i understand hermione feeling the way she did when harry didn't tell her about the disturbance... she has every right to know what is going on in / around her house... but i also understand that harry didn't want to cause hermione anymore worry than he has already given her over the last 7 years...

can't wait to read more..

candice

What can I say? Another great chapter; I almost wish there was some great big hairy mudblood-hating threat looming on the horizon so the story could continue. I just finished reading 'Pride and Prejudice' for the first time and was amazed at the subtle cultural differences woven throughout the work. Little things, like seeing 'condescention' being used as a positive term, and the divisions between classes not only commented on, but accepted as a positive force in society.

Reading that puts other Regency period works in perspective, both the originals and modern works set within that time frame. Your characters are still too modern to really fit within a true Regency period novel, but you do a better job than most. Well done!

love this story! i cant wait to read the rest of it

This was a great chapter and I look forward too more.
I think that you did exceedingly well on this chapter, showing the different aspects of their relationship and then having it analysed by an outside party.
Again, well done, and I hope for more soon.
BYe

another brilliant chapter

I was suprised about the reason for the quarrel but not disappointed.

I have to say, I\'m almost a little disappointed that the fight didn\'t have more substance. You do happiness so well, with such subtlety, but your fight was a little on the boring side. It\'s a small thing, trivial as you wrote. I was expecting a little more - I expected the conflict to be a peak in the plot, but it\'s almost nothing. I always enjoy reading your stories, but this chapter fell a little flat for me.

He blinked, nonplussed for a moment as he could swear that she had just touched the tip of her tongue to her parted lips in a movement that was pure provocation.

“Don’t listen to your father. He suffers from a persistent delusion that I married him for his charm.”