AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 30/06/08
Sorry - forgot to add chapter alert with the last review. Sorry for the useless message. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 30/06/08
I can't believe you stopped there! I was so looking forward to another tumble in the bedroom scene. You write them well. I do love it when you update. Which means you should do it again quickly! I read this site to keep up with your stories. |
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do you have reason why you choose to use a formal manner to call the other character. i mean, by using surname. it will be nice if you just use the first name.
btw, it's a nice one. i love to read the next chapter |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 29/06/08
I enjoyed the interplay between the verbal conversation and the physical touches that underscored their building relationship. Harry's musing on what he had thought he wanted in a wife versus what that might have eventually led to was interesting. I loved the talk with Remus, and that Remus compared Hermione to Lily. Ginny was well done, subtle enough in her initial flirtations that I wondered if Hermione was too sensitive, until she tripped against Harry. I look forward to seeing what happens next! |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 29/06/08
You write Regency era fic very, very well, keeping the formal tone without letting it become too stiff and awkward. I liked how Harry was initially hesitant around the Grangers, but how he gradually relaxed. His discussion with Mr. Granger was great, particularly his fumble about how much danger Hermione was in and his quick recovery. It was also nice to see Hermione from her father's point of view as a man who'd encouraged his daughter's intelligence despite the conventions of the era. I look forward to the Weasleys! |
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Good thing he didn't kiss Ginny... such a... he needs to tell Hermione he loves her!! Come on, she's suffering there! Oh well, until next chapter! |
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weirdgirlUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 25/06/08
fantastic chapter  I like the slow buildup and the not too much drama/angst. I just hope there wouldn't be after this chapter, the drama/angst i mean.
I smell a misunderstanding between H/Hr coming but I hope it won't be dragged out too long if it does come.
It would be fun to read if you do go and make Harry do the kneel before Lady Danvers and thanking her bit for real
Lady Danvers is she inspired by some character in a romance novel? Just that this character name is so familiar I just can't remember where I read it before.
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I love how your writing reflects the era for which you have set you story. May I congratulate you on a fantastic story so far, and too say that I anticipate your next chapter soon.
BYe |
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HarnGinUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 24/06/08
 I admit I adore regency romances. Thank you so much for putting some of my favorite characters into one. Is Neville going to make an appearance?
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kajlimaSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 22/06/08
The way Ginny reacts is suspicious. Did Harry actually believe her words that when she could not sleep she reads book? Yeah right. I say she’s spying on Harry and that clumsy foot is just so cliché. How dare she flirt with him at his own house! Maybe she wishes to have an affair with Harry. Shameless woman! I hope Harry shows her that he desires Hermione more than her and rub it in her face.
Great job!!! I love it!!! keep updating |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 21/06/08
 Keep up the good writing! can't wait to see there relationship grow! |
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tepiestarSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 21/06/08
uh-oh mr. potter. never keep secrets from your wife, no matter how insignificant it is to you. it's just gonna come back & bite you in ass. ginny ginny ginny. *shakes head at her*.  can't wait until next. |
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An update! This chapter was interesting, I honestly cannot wait for the next. I love the way you write, everything seems to flow. |
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 19/06/08
author sure have a way in torturing the readers like myself. oh please update soon! it's really getting MORE exciting! |
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