Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 15/09/07
it was very nice. its nice to see that everyone (but)ginny turned out happy. that only sad thing was ava, she doesn't even know that harrys her dad!wonder if they would ever tell her?great job though |
Author Feedback: Do you really think that is the case, that Ava doesn't know that Harry is her real dad? The families (including Ava's) come off as being rather close, and perhaps the truth is known, but out of respect, Ava calls Harry Uncle Harry? Tom is Ava's father, even if not by birth.
Thank you for your review. It was fun. |
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SkyraiderSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 15/09/07
Well, Ginny the lovesick a... I found this a little weird in getting to the plot and a stange way of a woman to intrigue a man to come to her. Well, I am male, that my be the reason. All's well that ends well. |
Author Feedback: Women do crazy things when they are in love. Crazy, irrational things that to sane people make no sense. I personally wouldn't do this to get a guy, but I guess she thought it would work.
Thank you for the review. |
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I think its a bit of an awkward ending and it would be nice to have an epilogue to tie up loose ends such as what happened with Ginny, if Harry and Hermione actually get together, who becomes the next minister, etc. And yes, I've read start to finish, I just think this is probably the first review. I've gotten horrible and writing them... |
Author Feedback: No, problem. I hope that you enjoyed it for the most part and that the epilogue fills in the knowledge you seek.
Thank you for your review. |
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I, personally, think you should write an epilogue. You did a wonderful job, and I think you should let people know that Hermione and Harry, did, indeed, live happily ever after with Ava and their millions of other Potter babies.
Please, for me?
Thanks for writing!! 
Swishy |
Author Feedback: LOL.
I don't know if you (or others) are actually going to be pleased with the epilogue, but I wrote it before I read the reviews, so it is written the way I thought best.
Thank you for thinking I have done a wonderful job. It makes up so much for all the sentiments that I did a terrible job.
Thank you so much for your review. The epilogue is dedicated to you! |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 15/09/07
I think you should write and epilogue. see what happens to ginny, ron draco,hermione, harry and ava.
I was so surprised i was all GINNY! the ending was good. so now they remember everything and have their daughter back.
PLEASE DO A EPILOGUE |
Author Feedback: Awe, yeah. I don't think many people are actually going to be happy with the epilogue, not the way it all played out, but maybe they will understand??
I thank you for your review and hope that you check back on any new stories that I may write. |
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EldanarSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 15/09/07
I love this story Konflickted, I really do.
So please, pretty please!!! Write an epilogue!!!
Eldanar |
Author Feedback: Epilogue written!
Thank you for your review and hopefully any future stories will peak your interest.
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alijiwaniSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 15/09/07
ok, thats totally not cool for an ending - you can't leave us hanging like that. More info! Another chapter! |
Author Feedback: I added the epilogue, so hopefully that will tie up all the loose ends.
Thank you for the review. |
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BimrinSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 15/09/07
I would like to see an epilogue I understand the ending but the last few chapters have seemed a bit jumbled and confusing and I would like to see it wrapped up. |
Author Feedback: Thank you for your review. |
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h/hr4everSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 15/09/07
well the ending left me a bit staring... I guess I wanted an epilogue to look into h/hr's life with Ava and also maybe the memories...? |
Author Feedback: Well, I am not sure if the epilogue is going to please you, then, but it is written the only way I felt at peace finishing this thing for good.
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The Story was amazing... (Ginny came as a shock !) 
An epilogue would be appreciated  |
Author Feedback: Thank you for the review and I hope you enjoy the epilogue. |
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SoccaGSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 15/09/07
KOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!! i still luv it, u hav skill mate! alot of it 2!!!! plz keep writing, i realli lyk ur stuff!!!! |
Author Feedback: I definitely will not stop writing, but you will have to wait for another story from me here. My publisher is demanding to know when the sequel to my real book is going to be ready for the editors. Kind of takes priority over anything I would get to do fun.
Thank you for the review and check back. I want to get some more little stories up for all to enjoy.
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oh, please do an epilogue. I would love to see what happened next. So then what exactly are Hermione and Draco's positions in the ministry, and was Harry really trying to overthrow the Ministry or was that just another one of Ginny's manipulations? Pretty please do an epilogue. By the way, I love the name Ava, that is what I want to name my daughter if I ever have one. |
Author Feedback: I didn't put any of the information you requested in the epilogue, it didn't seem relevant, but I can tell you. Draco never makes Auror (stays in the Hall of Records, I supposed, though I guess he could have taken over Ginny's position for the new minister of magic). Hermione is still an Auror, I suppose, but maybe not. I don't think Harry had any intentions of overthrowing the ministry.
Thanks for the review! |
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oh wow, powerful chapter. I feel bad for those parents, who are going to lose Ava, and for Ron. Can't wait to see what happens |
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come on mate! you HAVE to write an epilogue!
anyway this turned out to be a great journey; this will always be a favourite |
Author Feedback: I am glad that you like it, Nemo. You have been there since the beginning and have been super great!
The epilogue is posted and hopefully it leaves you happy and content!
Thank you so much for your review. |
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sertadSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 15/09/07
Harry is going to save Ginny? Oh, how awful. I'm so upset now, don't think I can finish the story.  |
Author Feedback: Well... if you will hang tight, I am wrapping up the last paragraphs and ending it all... tonight.... like now... in a few... lol...
Keep reading. |
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