Harry85Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 09/09/07
Till now Scorpius is the only one without the slightest bruise,  |
Author Feedback: You would have thought with him being a Malfoy the Potters and the Weasley would have taken the piss out of him more (not sure what that means, but my English friend says it a lot, so it made its way into my colorful phrases box...lol) |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 17 | Date : 09/09/07
they were heard! How embarrassing! 
AS for Ginny, having a werewolf as a son whould prevent her from being so close-minded against the girl...I expected that from her, but no...  |
Author Feedback: LOL... I know... but you gotta be quiet in an appartment building... trust me.
Yeah, Ginny... I wasn't liking her too much in this story... I am really not a fan of hers. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 16 | Date : 09/09/07
Whoa, they all escaped. Great! I can't wait to see how they will cope! |
Author Feedback: LOL... you read fast. Can you believe Ginny has her own son's warrant? How's that for motherly love? |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 09/09/07
So James figured it out, didn't he? Although he still isn't convinced, at least now he suspects she is a vampire. |
Author Feedback: I think he is smart. I think he is reserving judgment, but yeah... I came to the same conclusion when I went back and reread it. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 09/09/07
Thanks for replying to my reviews, your answers made me understand some things better. 
As fo this chapter, Ginny got caught twice in one day, |
Author Feedback: I know... she is so careless...
I mean if you get caught once... you at least wait before you go and do that again. I mean how often does one person really need it???
I felt so BAD when I wrote the part about Harry, though. I didn't want to hurt him, but I wanted him out of his marriage with Ginny. Granted, we know Harry cheated on Ginny fourteen years ago. But its like the statute of limitation ran out on that one. It doesn't seem as bad as Ginny's. Harry and Hermione had, what, that single act of indiscretion? Sure he still thinks about it from time to time, but it was 14 yrs ago. Ginny's got this relationship with Draco... more than a single act of indiscretion, you know??
And I am not into people cheating on spouses, it just fit with the story, you know.
Glad things were cleared up and I look forward to how the other chapters come across to you.
Thanks for reading. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 08/09/07
Have Harry and Hermione been shagging behind Ron's back? That can't be good. I hoped you would make them hook up after their marriages were down, not having an affair... |
Author Feedback: Well, Harry and Hermione started it what... 14 years before, back in the early days. Tho I am sure it wasn't malicious, Harry and Hermione stepped out first. They didn't continue, tho, so I think it does redeem them a little bit. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 08/09/07
Well...i don't think James and her should hook up, you know. There is too much age difference, in my opinion. Well, no, not really. three years is not much, yet it never happened in the HP universe, everyone hooked up with people their same age or one year younger at the maximum...so it feels strange. |
Author Feedback: I don't think they should either. If I am not mistaken, they don't actually ever hook up... It is not so uncommon to have feelings for some one +/- 3 yrs. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 08/09/07
Oh, perfect...cheating Ginny, just what we needed. I wonder how long this thing with Draco has been going on... |
Author Feedback: I hate that I made Ginny out to be the 'bad' guy, because she really isn't, but it just kind of seems that way... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 08/09/07
So James is a werewolf? Why? I don't get how could he be one... |
Author Feedback: To be honest, I am not sure either. Must have happened some time before I wrote the story though, something Lily says later. LOL. Maybe it has something to do with the department Ginny works in at the Ministry. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 08/09/07
Er...I'm slightly confused at what this chapter is here for...  |
Author Feedback: Oh, well... I went back and read it, and it really doesn't add anything, I know, except to cause continued conflict between James and Rayleigh... probably could have done without that chapter...
It was meant to set up another scene that never made it really into the story. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 08/09/07
Whoa, so the girl's a vampire? Interesting. And Draco kissing ginny...weird. |
Author Feedback: Foreshadowing... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 08/09/07
Wow!! I really loved this story!!
And i'm loving your other ones!!
Keep up the good work!! |
Author Feedback: Wow, really? See. I was a fan of this one until about the middle and then I started to fall apart... so it kind of started to fall apart.
Glad someone liked it enough to comment... even anonymously (I know... I know... not everyone wants to be associated with MY brand of crazy... lol)...
Thanks Anonymous Stranger...
I live to write for YOU! |
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