 well that was a shocker, james a dad... great story!!
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   LMAO!!! omg loved the last bit with ron..
ooo.. vamps and werewolves.. i don't think i've read a story with both..  great job so far .. i hope the runaways are ok!!
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i think get it though the chapter #'s don't work out.. it's missing ch6? |
Author Feedback: I went through and checked 6,7,8 and they look fine... remember that Lily and James in this story would be Harry and Ginny's kids... not Harry's parents... |
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I love the story so far but.... i don't think this chapter belongs here.. it's from To Wash the Black Dog
is there a chapter 7 for this story? |
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Leon21Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 21/02/08
Great story! Really liked it. Really interesting idea. I hate this ten word rule, not much else I could think of to say. lol |
Author Feedback: Don't feel bad... when I Read and review... I find myself unable to figure out how to say "Great Story" and get over the ten word rule... which I agree sucks.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and feel free to read and review my other pieces. |
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Leon21Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 21/02/08
This is a chapter from your L/J Fic, I just hope the next one is the one that is supposed to follow the Love/Hate chapter. |
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KimazonSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 31/12/07
A very interesting start. I'm lookng forward to reading more! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 16/12/07
excellent story even if it was a bit hurried and confusing however you need a disclaimer stating you own no rights to harry potter for legal reasons |
Author Feedback: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I have a disclaimer on my 'bio' page, and we all know I didn't create this world. If I did, things would have been different. |
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It\'s a good story, with an actual plot, not just fluffy suff. Well written.
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BexisSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 12/09/07
So far it's been rather predictable, with Rayleign being Riddle and now, I presume Viktor being her father.
But with the last paragraph, things just got more interesting. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, this is not one of my greater creations, if I say so myself.
Thanks for the review, and don't let this piece sway you to my other pieces. |
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PercySigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 09/09/07
Not too sure whats happened here, but it seems chapter 7, \'Love-Hate\' has been replaced with Chapter 7 of your James/Lily fic.
Besides that, I\'ve liked what i\'ve read so far |
Author Feedback: Crap... I don't know...
I will replace it. My bad!
I have no idea what happened, but the correct chapter is up in place... and damn, it is a bit important! Sheesh... what is my problem?? |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 09/09/07
So in the end James and her hook up. I mean, if they have a son, they are going to get married soon or alter, and James is quite smitten with her so he won't refuse for sure. I just hoped you would have showed them dating before them having a child. I mean, it's a bit sudden to find them with a child without even seeing them kiss or anything, isn't it? |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I know.. but I was realllllllly tired at the end and I was like hurry up already and get this over with... I know, its a sad little cop out.
If I ever rewrite it, which I may, I will repost it. Chances are, there would be more chapters though... a lot happened in six years...
I think she ended up at that all girls school that Fleur came from (lord only knows how to spell it... lol... and I can't find all my books... some genius packed all but seven... sheesh).
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 09/09/07
I think she should have gone back to school, completed her instruction and then left to cure the others. Byt the way, who's going to cure her? It's not fair that she remains a vampire. |
Author Feedback: Read the epilogue  |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 09/09/07
Well, if she can really cure them is good, but who can cure her? |
Author Feedback: Ah... this is where the prophecy falls into play... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 19 | Date : 09/09/07
Definitely surprising that Krum is the father. But Harry's right, who better than them can fulfill a quest? |
Author Feedback: Yeah, not really sure how he and the squib daughter of Lord Voldemort met (or hooked up for that matter), but I am surprised no one picked up on it sooner. His letters to Melissa were signed ~V, and there were vague references to the father being famous... oh well... so is the curse of the writer, I suppose. |
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