kayceSigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 09/01/08
I rarely read Marauder-era stories, but I find that I rather like this one... I really like the plot and can't wait to finish it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 28/12/07
  love love love love love love the chapter. no lie. yeah... really... |
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Fantastic. This was really a great story. I loved every bit of it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/12/07
Sanctuary in someone? This is soooooooooooo wrong to the people. U cant do it. |
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KelseyUnsigned | Chapter : 28 | Date : 18/11/07
wow! i read this entire story today... and i abslutely loved it! all the drama had my heart pounding the entire time! Great job!!! |
Author Feedback: Sorry I haven't replied to your review before now... 
I am glad you liked it. |
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Well at least she finally called Snape out for being the arse that he is. And so now James knows that she remembers... I wonder how that's going to play out.
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: Thank you sooo much for all of your reviews. I really do appreciate them, and I know some of them are shorter than others. I am working on length (some people like them long, others like them short... so either way, not everyone is going to be happy, for sure). I hope that you have the time and ability to read this all the way through. I rather like this fiction. |
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I'm kind of disappointed that your chapters are so short now. They were a great length at the beginning of the story, and now it doesn't even take me a full minute to read them. They're still good, I just wish they weren't over so quickly.
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: I tried to vary them in length because not everyone likes to read super long chapters. I didn't want to drag them all out forever, just to have length.
I hope that the last couple of chapters or so are to your liking (length and content wise). |
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I didn't exactly understand the point of this chapter. It wasn't bad, it just seemed unnecessary. Also, I don't see why it was necessary to confiscate her dagger. The teachers know something's wrong, and it's not like stabbing yourself in the hand is like trying to kill yourself. And it's kind of necessary for potion making. Anyway, I'm really hoping things start shaping up properly in the next few chapters.
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: To be honest, I have no idea what happened in chapter 20 (vaguely remember her stabbing herself with the dagger). I think it had to do something with a reaction to Snape's imperfect amnesia potion (almost but not quite the same color as the previous potion Lily had taken).
Stick with it. |
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She's being stupid. She loves him, he loves her. That's all there is to it. His friends will be okay, and Snape's a royal prat anyway.
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: We know that, but who knows what is going through their minds during this whole thing. |
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I hope she wakes up soon. And I guess I missed the part where he made them think he had taken it. I suppose they were just looking out for him then.
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: Think back to the chapter 'The Second (un)Forgetable Drink' (or whatever I named it). Sirius and Remus gave him the potion and he poured it out. He isn't moaning about Lily anymore, so they just assumed he must have drank it.
I don't believe that they asked and he lied to them, I just think it was assumed. |
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Thank goodness! I was afraid they were going to have to start completely over. I can't wait for the potion to wear off. Unless Snape tampered with it...I wouldn't put it past the slimy git.
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: Snape can be sneaky, and while we know he is great at potions (think HBP), we know no one is perfect... |
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This is heartbreaking. PLEASE let it get happier in the coming chapters. I'm not sure I could handle it.
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: There are some very unhappy chapters, but then they are all rewarded with happy chapters. I hope you can survive the dark chapters to enjoy the light chapters. |
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Oh goodness, that bewitching Lily Evans just has all the guys wanting her, doesn't she? I'm a little disappointed with Sirius, but that's okay.
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: Yeah, a dark time for Sirius...
It is forgivable, though, I hope. To be the most desired girl in the school... fantastic. |
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I wonder how long they're going to be able to keep up this little "we still dislike each other" charade. Probably not a whole lot longer. And I'm very glad Sirius did end up maturing a little bit by the time he met Harry!
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: I know, right. I guess 13 years in prison was just what Sirius needed to mature up, I suppose.
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While I am a little surprised that Lily went from not wanting to speak to James to sleeping with him in the course of 24 hours, I am very glad they're together now. I can't wait to see what happens when everyone else comes back!
xo Allie |
Author Feedback: People do stupid things when they stop thinking and start just living in the moment. I wouldn't have assumed that she was that type of girl, but she is just full of surprises. I think that it all just got the better of them. |
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