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Longfletch

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/10/07

I feel that you could have left off the H/Hr at the end. It was nice to see, but it felt a little tacked on. This fic was good overall since it was your first. Hope you continue with On Your Doorstep (have to review it)!

Author Feedback: thank you so much for the comment! yeah, the h/hr was kind of random, wasn't it? hee hee, oh well.

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dupton

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/07

Aww. So sad, so sweet. Short, but to the point. Loved it.

Author Feedback: thanks so much!

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willow.

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/09/07

Awww lovely little story

You worked hard on this and I`m glad to see you posted it

Author Feedback: thank you so much! <3

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Loveedoo

Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/09/07

Aww...that's ADORABLE!!!!
The only thing that was wrong with it was that it was too short

. Maybe next time you could write a longer fic?
I look forward to watching your writing, toots!
Kisses,
lovee

Author Feedback: First off, thank you so much for the review! I know that it was rather short, which is usually the kind of writing that I'm better at, but I am trying to work on some longer stories. Thank you so much for reading and the kind review! It's the first one I've gotten!

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