Definitely a good redo of the epilogue into a more believeable form. I thought all the first sons being named "Fred" had a certain Weaseley touch that rang true, and I can -so- see George being the third, it fits his sense of humor (and I suspect Fred's howling his head off about it, where ever he is now). It's a shame we don't get to see Draco & Ginny, but I reckon that would've just complicated the main thrust of your epilogue.

As 'tis, 'tis nicely done.

you win at life, if only for the whole "fred" thing i mean, seriously, the whole thing could've been crap and i'd still call it genius. i liked it, it was cute. though i don't get the whole peter thing, but that doesn't matter because i know i'm biased against the man *shrugs* it was a good little fic, anyway. like i said, the "fred" thing stole the show. oh, and luna's molventuff good job.

See? That's what JK should have written for the epilogue! If only she would have been smarter. Thanks for writing this!

you know if it wasn't for this 10 word rule i would have been able to say one overly dramatic word lol and that is PERFECT. I love it! gorget the crapilouge....this is now my official harry potter epilouge

i think i like this version of the epilogue better!!lol.You wrote this very well!! Great Job!!

Yeah! That's right, between all the history's until now, there was still the epilogue missing. But now is done!

Good work!

This was really good, though I'm still not too sure about the name Severus, but it's your story so you can name the characters what you want! It was pretty good considering it's an epilogue to a story that wasn't yours! Keep up the good work!!

Unlike what some others have said, I can absolutely see all of the Weasleys naming their sons Fred. Except for Draco and Ginny, though I suppose she could probably have verbally beaten our favorite ferret into submission.

Both Hermione and Harry being employed at Hogwarts is always something I`ve imagined, and I simply cannot describe my annoyance at JK not having at least Hermione employed as a professor in the epilogue. Very good story overall, though I still cannot see how Harry would give his child the first name of Severus. Well, it`s not my choice either way, but kudos on a job well done.

I don\'t care what anyone else says - the Fred names were quite original and so like a Weasley! Fred would have loved it. Cute idea!

Sweet story - what I liked best were all the Weasley grandchildren named Fred - that was funny!!

Contrary to what others have said, I think the idea of all the Weasleys naming their first-born sons Fred is a great idea, and something I could totally see them doing.

Hi, nice other epilogue, but I think it would be awful if all kids would be named Fred-something. Maybe the Weasleys would be quickly called the "Freddies"! I also would find it horrible if my children (nephews, nices) were at the same school as myself. I thought it was great to be away from the parents at Hogwarts. Imagine Molly Weasley being a teacher (or probably the cook) at Hogwarts and the effects on the Weasleys. The Story I liked but this two things I did not.

I think you did a fine job with the fic though I thought Hermione was a bit too Mollyesque and I wasn't all that fond of most of the names. But other than that I think you did a good job as it is difficult to write an ending to someone eles' story. And you've actually roused my unruly muse...which at the moment should stay silent. Again, good job on the fic.

Good Lord, no matter how much the Weasley's wanted to remember Fred, there's no way they would name all the firstborn boys "Fred-insertnamehere".

Fred-Ron sounds absolutely atrocious.

Other than that, the fic's pretty good.

Good idea, I think that should be a challenge! It's a difficult one, but I'm sure there's some way to make that train station scene better... maybe.
I liked Sirus as a name, and I didn't mind Dora (tho Tonks hated her name!)but I'm not fond of the Fred-Ron thing god can u imagine the jibes that kid will get well done tho