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GoldenTrioFan
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/08
That was so cool.I really enjoyed reading this story, I loved how hermione went and stayed with Draco and Pierre(probebly didnt spell that right lol..)Exellent writing xxx
 

dysfunctionalspirit
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/02/08
I love how you wrote Draco!! He was plenty ooc but it was so amazing it really didn't matter. I'm in love with this Draco .. i must fly over to paris and kidnap him..
love the rest of it too.. great job with it!!
ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/08
Ok, I loved this one shot. Absolutely loved it. There are just a couple details I am not so happy about. Hermione smoking, and Draco being the one able to bring ehr out of her state. I know there's that other sentence toward the end, "I don't want you to think Draco is the only person that can reach me when I get down", still I'm not comfortable with Draco being the one able to make her enjoy herself even when she doesn't want to.
 

blackvampireknight
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/07
this was a very intriging story that i could break from for even the smalest of moments... and i do love what you have done with draco.
 

jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/10/07
that wa so oool draco being gay ohh my that was so unexpected and the hole outfit i must say the hole chokolate box idea ws so cool i really did love that i really liked these fic
 

papermask
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/07
So cool! Very nice work on your part on this piece.
 

Herms_Hedwig
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/07
Oooh! It was really, really wonderful. I loved it and now I am going to check your other stories out. It was just terrific!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/09/07
I like gay Draco! One thing, though... The fact that you're gay doesn't immediately implicates that you have to punctuate all your sentences with 'darling', darling.

But it still works well in written form. There is a nice vivid imagery of a special kind of character that comes with the way you've written Draco's dialog.
 

pstibbons
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/07
Nice. I liked the parting shot by Hermione telling her ex to buy his woman a different engagement ring.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/07
I enjoyed this one-shot a lot. It was written well. I can't wait to see something else from you soon.
 

lala_lov3r
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/07
seriously, one of the best one-shots i've read ever. really REALLy good. and im glad you made draco gay. =P
 

Kandy123
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/07
that was a nice one shot,the whole older man in the beginning was surprising as was draco being gay.but it all fit together.
 

TogetherForever, H/Hr
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/07
Cute. I loved this little one-shot, I can't wait to see what other stuff (story wise) you will come up with!

*%* Susanna *%*
 

h.jean
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/07
nice story but i din really like d part abt hermione smoking n drinking..well,smoking.but d part on draco being a gay made me laugh so much...could we haf chap 2?
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/07
This is great! I love the icy hermione in the first part though I would prefer the bossy Harry Keep up the good work
 

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