Dunno if you're giving up on this story or just hit a writer's block, but I'm interested in what Hermione will do. And Ginny's reaction. Does she know? I was trying to figure out how she could possibly not know... it's not like Harry could just come home one day and tell Ginny "oh here's our son, you gave birth by the way"? All in all a nice twist on canon. |
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And I'm extremely happy that she's doing what's right for herself! Too many self sacrificing Hermione's out there. It makes me despair because I know I'll have to wait longer for the inevitable H/Hr.
Great chapter! |
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FrancisUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 06/09/07
It's really sad, but interesting. I want to see Ginny being really evil, because even if Hermione wants to be happy, I don't think she should break up a family just like that. It's not her, and we saw that with all her sacrifies, but.. I don't know... see ya. |
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MisCardSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/09/07
What I've read in some of the reviews for this story is deplorable. Since when does everyone attack the ficmods of this site?? Willow did her job, which is making sure that every story on this website adheres to the rules, and you all are treating her like this? Sorry, but that's not cool.
I'm a ficmod along with Willow, as well as the Portkey Forum Manager, and all I have to say are the rules are around for a reason. Believe it or not, it's a good reason too. Rules maintain order. If you don't like that then Go. Somewhere. Else.
Anymore reveiws like the one from the person that likes the word GODFORBID and they WILL be deleted immediately. Attacking a Portkey moderator is not allowed and will NOT be tolerated! Anymore snide remarks from the author of this story and this story will be deleted, and the author will be reported to the owner of the website. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/09/07
wow... I cant believe how shirty some people get about stuff. Really, what\'s to be expected on a H/HR sight, if GODFORBID, your story mentions anyting but H/HR... \'cause GODFORBID, the pair ever experience any feelings for anyone EXCEPT the other. \'cause GODFORBID does anyone ever learn from previous relationships, or actually date/see someone, and it NOT be true love, but just dating. Sheesh!
Sometimes this sight really does get to me in the utter inflexability of some members (did someone, even if it were a mod, really QUOTE the rules to you? how imature), however, there is some top-notch fanfiction here, and I enjoy H/HR just as much as I enjoy R/HR (yes folks, you can enjoy both!). And, this is right up there with the other top-notch stories on the sight.
This fic was quite good. I think the first chapter showed how much H/HR really loved eachother. But for Herms at least, she just couldnt see a way to make things right, without hurting everyone involved. It was very clear. I am curious about how the switch of the child happened. Seems at least Ginny new, and probably Ron, but seems like there should have been more repercussions.
Well, I guess I cant complain too much, \'cause all this hubub means two more chapters, but thats just my pure selfishness comeing through.
Lighten up, folks. Enjoy a good story for what it is: a good story! |
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I've really enjoyed this little ficlet of yours and will be reading more of your works in the future. Can't wait to see if you write what Hermoine does now that James knows that she is his birthmother. I take it that Harry and Ginny don't have any other kids then. But you mentioned that Harry was going to Marry Hermoine but she disappeared and set a date with Ron? Interesting would love more background as to why and what happened even if its in another fic |
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van_twitchUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/09/07
I rarely read angsty fics, but this one was too good to pass. I wish you could have provided a scene wherein Harry and Hermione told their story to James, but I understand that you can't because of time constraints. Anyway, since you said this was a trilogy, I hope you update soon. |
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oh wow! that was so very good, loved it. Harry was amazing! and I am sure James will be too |
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Oh Its so sad, but I really like it, Hermione's feelings are so perfect, so much like her, great job! |
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AMAZING!  i love it! i didn't think there was anything wrong w/ the first chapter! i think it showed the love that Hermione has for harry! i think it held a lot of emotion! with this chapter i would have loved to read how they broke the news to james. but over all its great! |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/09/07
Great new chapter, I really liked it.
Sorry about all the hassle you're being given. Some people (i.e. the narrow minded) just can't handle some types of stories, and it's sad, really. I had enjoyed the first chapter as it was (yes, I could read between the lines  ), kudos to you for it. I hope that you don't get *too* discouraged by the negative comments, and get enough positive ones to help with that. This really was a good one-shot, no matter what anyone else says.
Can't wait to read the next part. Keep up the great fics!
*hugs* (cuz you may need them)
~Cat~ |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/09/07
I liked it a lot and am glad to see that you are going to be continuing it. I can't wait to see what will happen in the next update. Update soon please! |
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willow.Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/09/07
Your story didn`t HAVE to have a "happy H/Hr ending." It just had to end H/Hr, this is a H/Hr site and ending your story with R/Hr and H/G was obviously against the rules. |
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Good chapter.Update soon.One quick question:What happened to poor little Hugo? I don\'t mind if you forgot him because this is AU. |
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