I like this a lot. It's not very long, yet you managed to fit so much in here. Very nice work.

The transition between thinking of Remus and Harry was a bit jumpy, but the story was well done over all. I'm partial to short stories myself (I write them all the time) and this was a nice change. Can't wait for more from you.

This would have been a much better epilogue than the one we got. I never was a fan of the really short stories but I would rather this than what caused me to scream about my eyes and how they burned. You're not a bad writer, so don't let anybody's opinion keep you from writing. Too many writers stop because they are discouraged. Do it for you. Just some advice in case it's ever needed. I hope you don't need it actually. Cheers

short and sweet. continuing? nice start, but care to elaborate how they got married?