Loved the ending! I'm sure this is where Fred and George took inspiration for their leaving Hogwarts in fifth year!

Sad chapter, although the kiss made it happier. However I really like your style

Well, she couldn't really expect him to tell her Remus' secret, could she?

Well, at least it's a start...Lily seems to be a bit more reasonable now...

Ah, so Lily is jealous...but doesn't want to admit it yet...

Well, Lily's being really silly here...I hope if James dates someone else it will wake her up because right now she's an insufferable bitch

Oh, come on Lily, stop being this stubborna bout him...he's changed and he wants to prove it to you, but honestly, a little joke now and then is not to terrible...

loved this story.. you did a great job.. just what I was looking for tonight.
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dysfunctionalspirit

wow that was so good i luved all of it speshly the end

i hope theres a sequil

bessie b

That was really great (and well worth keeping me up reading well past my bed time). I see you have written others and I plan to read all of them as well. I love the ending, you left it so happy when it really could have ended rather dark. Great job!

Oh, wow... poor James! I feel really aweful for him. I mean, we all assume that Lily and James must loose their parents (otherwise Harry should have gone to his grandparents over his aunt).

I look terribly forward to the next chapter.

Ooh! I like the Quidditch game. I haven't read any stories that actually played a full game, mentioned it, yes, but not like this. It was super.

While somewhat shorter than the previous, this did not disappoint in the least. There are a lot of curious things going on, like what is up with Sirius? Poor James, he likes her so much, and poor Lily, for someone so bright, she doesn't have a clue!

This is really great. I look forward to reading the other chapter. I really enjoyed reading this. It very well written and the length is perfect. I hope that the other chapters are as fantastic as this.

Poor James! I feel so bad for him! He had just gotten a kiss from the girl of his dreams and then he finds out that his father is dying! I would have cried my heart out!
I cant wait for the next chapter please update soon!