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I like the ending. The last paragraph was the best. I loved the humor in the piece and the serious moments. |
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I like this shorter chapter. The scheme is a good one. I like how Blaise and Pansy fight. The name of the chapter is awesome. |
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Good name of the chapter. I like the conversation between Hermione and Draco. I like how the end is of this chapter is a little of a cliff hanger. |
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I like this chapter. I like how you have the other ships in the story. |
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oh genius. abso-freaking-lutely genius. and for a second i thought crabbe was reading the SAME comic book for the past 3 years. i had to reread that to make sure that there was an "s" on the end of "book" LOL!!!
that was cute, and rather humorous. and ginny IS the only person who'd be running around with a jersey on her head  (hoping to run into someone, perhaps? and not just *anybody,* either)
i'm really quite shocked that ron didn't exactly try to bash draco's head in. that is, when draco kissed ginny, not before. it's obvious that he tried to maim him before, i think. or worked really hard NOT to, take your pick. i'm going to say that hermione was holding him back. yeah. that sounds plausible
I loved this. especially this last chapter (ever the sap, that I am)  
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Author Feedback: haha, you know with Crabbe I wouldn't be surprised. He is rather thick.
I couldn't resist throwing that back into the last chapter. Ginny's character in this story always amused me, and I particularly liked the idea of bringing it into full circle- especially with her banging into Draco again with a jersey over her head.
Did I say that the portrait hole had closed? I might have to go back and re-read that. Ron didn't actually know that Ginny and Draco had kissed, so that would account for it. That and I think that Ron is terrified of what Ginny would do to him.
Glad you liked it! I sometimes wonder if I go a little too overboard with the fluff, but I love that cutsie stuff, so yeah.
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i can't believe i only read this now! why didn't i see this before? 
i read it from beginning to end in 24 hours. yeah, i loved it that much! it's the best fic i've read so far.
i love the plot and the very interesting characters. almost as if i wished this story was part of the books.
i hope you write more D/G's and please don't forget about A Marriage of Convenience.
by the way, i hope the review wasn't too overwhelming. |
Author Feedback: Haha, don't worry, it's pretty hard to overwhelm me. Sometimes I wonder myself if I scare people off with my massively long replies and reviews. You're safe with me
I'm glad you liked it so much! I had so much fun writing this fic, so I always love to hear people saying they enjoyed it too. I'm really not into the whole angsty side of things, and I love writing fun, light-hearted stuff like this.
That was a lot to get through in 24 hours though, but I commend your efforts! Hopefully it made sense all the way through, as I've never actually read this from beginning to end. I normally just read back over the chapters I need to when writing.
Oh, and don't worry, I have not forgotten about A Marriage of Convenience. I have about 5000 words written for it, and hopefully will manage to find some time to work on it either today or tomorrow. I have so many assignments to work on, but I try to get at least some relaxing time, so I'll work on it then.
Thanks for the review!! |
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shardracoSigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 16/05/08
waaaaaaah...I've only read this now...my pc was broken..
it's a sad and happy ending...one less Draco and Ginny story for me...huhuhuhuhu! |
Author Feedback: Lol, s'pose you're lucky in a way. You got to read it when it was completed, and considering it took quite a long time to complete, that's something 
There's always plenty of good D/G stories around. Not sure what you've read, but if you're looking for some good ones, try Blue-Eyed Angel by RaineMalfoy, and also Bewitched Times by Adrial.
Actually I have a whole list of my favourites in my profile which are worth checking out. Some of them might randomly be there, but there's definitly a good selection |
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aromalSigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 03/05/08
hey,did u rewrite this story..becoz i remember reading the same story and year ago and it was totally different!!I dint get a chance to review then,but when now i wanted to,i saw that the story had completely changed..i mean,in that there was D/G and blaise/hermione..draco's does'nt go to burrow and stuff..and ginny was only friends with blaise(no kissing and all that)..am i right?is it the same story?because the 1st few chapters are same..i dont know..i am confused..i mean,u dont read 2 same stories with completely different endings..that one was my all time favs..anywayz this one was also beautiful..good work! |
Author Feedback: Yes, it was indeed the same story. I didn't like the Hermione/Blaise because my friend Katie pointed out to me that it always seemed like I was writing Ginny/Blaise, (and quite truthfully too), so I decided to restart it, get rid of that whole weird stuff with Bellatrix and all that, and just keep it a light-hearted comedy, with a love triangle instead. |
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KhayferUnsigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 29/04/08
I just wanted to write to let you know that I really loved this story.
I usually don't read pg-13 stories because they are too mushy for my taste. However, this story was just right for me.
I love love love your ending. This is one of those stories that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy inside... without being to sweet and mushy
Great Job |
Author Feedback: I don't usually stray over pg-13 to be honest. I think you can quite easily write a nice comedic story without being too cheesy or too smutty. That is what I hope to do with all my fics, and I hate over mushiness. Sometimes I think I might be guilty of it, but I have such a quirky idea of love that I hate to follow the typical route with it.
Anyway, I am very happy you liked the story, and thanks for letting me know too. I always love reviews |
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This is brilliant.
I don't read many Ginny/Draco stories, but I'm glad I did now |
Author Feedback: Aw, glad you liked it! D/G is my favourite ship, so I'm always reading them, ahha.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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Author Feedback: hahaa, would you believe me if I said that it was intentionally done? I wanted the ending to switch from the Ginny/Draco dialogue that I had been following, but I think it may have confused people after all that. 
I'm glad you liked the story though, and I've definitly enjoyed reading all your reviews! It's been fun, and thank you for reading!
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LOL.. Drakie-poo's making breaking up with Pansy a chore to be done.. |
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LynnUnsigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 24/04/08
Hi, I just wanted to say that I loved this story, and laughed out loud, gasped and ahhed all the way through. Congratulations on a brilliant tale.
Lynn x |
Author Feedback: Aw, I'm glad you liked it!!
Thank you, and thank you for reviewing! |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 24/04/08
Oh and by the way, I thought the Crabbe and Goyle thing at the end was really witty and cute it added a nice touch to the end of the story after that kiss |
Author Feedback: haha, glad you liked it. I didn't want to end it too cheesily, so I thought adding in that bit with Crabbe and Goyle would be a nice way to finish it. I seemed to have confused some of my readers doing that though, lol. |
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