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I love this, it's so simple and really short, but it says so much about the two of them and their relationship. |
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Hi, this was recommended here. Authors are welcome to post comments and alternate story URLs in the "Link to Discussion Forum" thread.
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/03/09
Oh wow, that was beautiful. And sad. I loved it. You portrayed Ron and Luna perfectly, and I lvoe your writing style. Great work.  |
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that was a great chapter! i really hope that u plan on continuing this story...
well written, and intresting!
hoping for possible next chapter soon,
*random girl |
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loony9373Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/09/07
loved it! no missing scene at all  i really hope that you are pkanning to write much more, i will be looking foward to your future works! |
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duptonSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/07
Aww. That is so adorable. I love the way you've written Luna- she is a perfectly normal person, simply without the need to ask people why they're doing whatever they're doing, because she knows they'll explain themselves eventually. Well, if we ignore all the invisible creatures.
But yes. Cute. I suppose it's a bit of a stretch for Ron to actually go to her dormitory (surely he didn't even know where the entrance to Ravenclaw Tower was?) but I can let that go in the face of sure cuteness. I really should stop using the word cute, shouldn't I? (I'm so damn cute.) |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/07
cute cute. wish there was more. wanted to know if youll be updating "denial". i think that is a great story and i cant wait to find out what happened when hermione stopped writing. keep up the good work |
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I really enjoyed that! Aw, Ron was nervous near Luna. Yaay R/L. |
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CarlaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/07
THIS IS SO MUCH LOVE. seriously. ronnie's such a gentleman  i loved it, it was very sweet. and i did get that feeling that, though luna kept thinking of herself as "lost," she actually sees everything in a better focus than most other people. i especially liked how she mentions that "her father lost her," it was very cute and very luna at the same time.
and good to see i'm not the only one who resents dumbledore even after everything that happened! i swear, people are so forgiving. *shakes head* anyway, good fic! |
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AsenathSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/07
(It's EverVengeful. The name should make that obvious, but just in case...)
It gets better every time I read it! And this is the third time I've read it, so just imagine how fantastic it seems. Truly wonderful, as per usual, and I hope neither one of us ever stops writing. |
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