oh my gosh....i love this fic...but you sound really mad...anyways i think this is great and the last part brought tears into my eyes..keep it up!!

Wow that was so emotional and intense! It was way to sad though.

well that was just depressing
but other then that it was good

i'm bothereing to review. this was an exceelent fic but really sad and i wished you write a sequel for it.

that was really really sad but very well written. thanks for no sequels.. its h/hr nothing else.. I liked it very much..


Ps plz don't write anything this sad again tho

*cries* wow. so sad - you're very good at evoking emotion. it's okay, though. hermione and the kids will meet up with harry in the next life.

dude. i thought there was like a rule where they had to end up together and one of tem can't die or whatever. umm, yeah this made me cry but wtf why did he have to die and that's it? not like even a come back or something like in DH?

You know, some of Tom's criticisms were very valid. I also felt that much of the story seemed forced and quite... unnatural. That said, I did enjoy it anyway. I guess it's like a guilty pleasure.

While I would still agree with him that this is not well-written, I've read your other work, "Even After Time" and I know you can write much better than this. You were probably too overcome with your anger or annoyance, I'd wager. It makes me curious though, if you were so annoyed that Harry cheated on Ginny and got divorced with Hermione in that fic, why didn't you write a Ginny-bashing (or Harry and Ginny-bashing) fic, but make poor Hermione suffer instead?

Allow me to dispense a piece of advice when reading fanfiction: When in doubt of the final pairings (assuming the pairings of the fic are of utmost importance to you), ALWAYS check out the final chapter first before devoting yourself to the story. That way, if you are indeed in for a rude shock, you could just hit that red "X" in the top right-hand corner of your screen immediately and save yourself much grief (and time too).

Back to the fic- all I can say is that I'm glad it's Harry who died and not Hermione. It's just me, but Hermione dying in a fic never fails to upset me, yet I'm perfectly alright with Harry dying. I'd attribute this to my wish of Harry dying in canon not coming true, which is to me, one of the biggest disappointments in DH. Screw JKR and her major lack of balls to kill of more major characters, or any of the really major characters. But I'm digressing.

To end off, I'd say don't bother puzzling over what the other anonymous reviewer posted about "Mozad" and stuff. All that stuff about hitmen gunning for JKR is just crap. And she certainly does not have spies protecting her. If you must know, there is actually an organisation called the "Mossad". It is the Israeli intelligence agency, sort of like their version of the American's CIA or the Brit's MI6.

omg i think that was the saddest thing i've ever written. i think i'll be surprised if anyone didnt get tears in their eyes after this...

i'll review simply cause you put the work into the story and it deserves it. Its well written, am i happy harry died by no means but its well written and shows the truth rarely seen in most fan fics, couples fight. good work on the story.

This is interesting. I made it to the end. I see you piled on the saddness by adding an unborn child. Nice touch.

I hope by really horrible fanfic you won't referring to any of mine. (hopefully you were referring to a book that shall remain un-named) That would be sad if I drove another author to write this.

Very good, yet very sad. I just can't believe Hermione has to deal with the hurt and everything, man that sucks. Great story, though. Sad, but good.

oh my gosh ,i am so emotional..i started sobbing when he died! but i suppose that this was just one of those things that you had to get out of your system, and i completely understand...you have a great talent for writing and i hope you plan to write much more in the near future. great work!

Um...great story? That was soooo damn sad. It was good though. When are you going to update 'Even After Time'?

My you are in a mood. How sad that life can be exactally like this. Life lesson, treat each day like it is your last, because it might be. Hope writing this made you feel better.