I hate cliffies...but I love this story!!! Can't wait till you explain how harrys' dad is there, and where Harry actually is. Can't wait for the next chapter, and hopefully it won't be a long wait. Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!!

Oh, this is a good story, and can't wait to find out what happens next. Hopefully it won't be a long wait. Keep up the good work, and as always....God Bless!!

aww . . . that was soo good . . . .
please update soon ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

harry and hermione forever and ever and ever and ever ! ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

aw . . . . . . . . wat did you stop for ? ? ? ? not very nice at all ! !! ! ! ! that was great ! !

harry and hermione forever and ever ! !

interesting... keep it goin. id like to see what you have planned, so ill save this to favorites... can you incorperate a bit of dark! harry?
-Razor

I think this chapter is much better because of the suspense. I have seen stories where Harry leaves on his birthday and sometimes gets attacked, but this was a much more original way of telling the story.

I feel that as you come up with more unique ideas, the better it sounds.

My only issue is the paragraph structure. Some paragraphs look long and it is not as easy to read as J.k. Rowling's books that break down into sections that are a little smaller.

Keep up the great work. One of the better stories lately. Write soon!!!

Oh wow really enjoying this so far glad that Hermione was able to send out a letter to Harry. Love how the letter ended waiting with baited breath to see what happens next. had read this on my cell phone but alas I can't leave FB which bites. But at least I was able to read this great start to a story and then write this up later