That scene needed something. This was it. Well and truly done.

this is the best one shot i have ever read! Believe me when i say i have read a lot of one shots and regular fics on this site. now i better stop writing so i can go read all your other H/Hr stories!!

Great little fic.. definitely could fit in the book and it would've been better for it.. none of this ron / Hermione and Harry / ginny non-sence. great job
ramble on
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Great one
Would be better if had ron idiot and ginny slut bashing

Next one have it!

Oh you entered the competition with this chapter from the other story, that's a great idea, i agree it was my favorite chapter. Just rated it as excellent, couldn't expect more from you. I was also wondering if you could help me with a fic i'm writing, after all i'm only studying high school and i'm from mexico so my english is not as qualified for a fic that everyone could understand. It's not great but i like it and i haven't quite finished but i'm on it, this is an important year for school so i haven't gotten much time but i had wanted to write a fic for a whole year until this idea came to my head. Anyway i will be eternally grateful if you could help me with the grammar and spelling (of course if you have the time) and even in the ending (i'm not sure on what to write for it). Hope you can and congratulations again, i sincerelly hope you win the competition

Awww! Go Harry! And go Krum for making Harry see that he really did have feelings for Hermione. I loved this and will definitely have to read more! Great work, it should have gone like this in Deathly Hallows!

Wow that's so sweet. You can just feel the electricity sparkling between them. Just lovely

This is a good story so far. The detail is good but not too over the top.

Wow that's so cool - thanks for that! Will look it up

great idea about Viktor revealing that to Harry as Barny! Did you write that song or is it a real song? It's really good

Definitely one time that Harry should be glad he listened to others rather than just keeping his own council. *wicked chuckle* I doubt Hermione will complain at all, though I suspect Ginny and Ron will complain considerably at length and ad naseum. It's a nice look at how very minor changes would've made DH a much more believeable book.

Pretty good, would of been pretty good if Ron followed them and they had a big fight in front of everyone, that woulda been funny

My apologies, I haven't read book 7, nor do I intend to! Thanks for the clarification.

This was wonderful. Instead of stupid and clueless, just a sudden awareness of what should be right.

That was a very good. I liked it a lot. I hope you will continue to write a few more stories.