Hello,
if the rest of the story exists somewhere I would like to read it.

Once again well written. I can see Malfoys character growth. Considering the site I have got to ask: Will you be pairing Draco with Ginny?
Or will you do the fourth most horrible thing in the history of fanfiction and pair him with Ron? (The first being Harry/Voldemort; second Harry/Snape; third Harry/Draco) Or perhaps the best Draco/none? I'm kind off curious.
See you next chapter,

Bukama Stealth

Now That was shocking: A Ron that's actualy making sense and using his mind on something other then quidditch and chess; a introspective Malfoy thinking about his next move and fearing his own darkness.
I'm kinda curious from your description I cant help but get the feeling that when the Ministry is done with punishing a death eater they'll kill him/her. Is Draco going to be captured and the rescues by Harry, etc.? will his parents be captured??

This certainly is a well written introduction chapter. I'm very glad that you've decided to ignore that little add on She called an Epilogue.
Downright horrendous that was. anywayy like I side it's a very good first chapter.
The moods have somewhat calmed down, help is offered where needed and the characters can think things through with a somewhat clear mind.
Besides that you've stayed in character for each off them. I particularly found the Malfoys well done, still proud but unsure as to what will happen next and if they will survive that.

Awesome chapter. The best is for in the story. I hope you do update soon. I like how you get the emotions down and the relations between the characters.

it's really good so far. i want to see what happens next

I just found this story and I think it's quite excellent so far. I'll keep reading - I hope you update soon!!

I'm really enjoying this story. I completely believe the change in Draco (very realistic of a life changing event).

I think the story is coming along splendidly. Although i was wondering when Darkness Rising would be finished?

You are off to a really good start. Its a bit heavy but with all the deaths I would expect no less. I can't wait to see where you take this. Great job!

Great chapter. And you have a really good story. I reviewed last time. You're doing a great job! Are you going to make Draco evil? Please don't ,I mean he was taught wrong, you probably get that. He is a good guy, he can't kill. Update soon!

Very good, the only thing I really want to see more is the couples that you choose, and what the future does hold.

I can't really remember when it was that Draco was almost burned. I feel stupid now. But I do have an idea of what Kingsley wants to talk about.
Good work. Keep it up.

Oh, I like this story alot. It makes alot more sense then what J.K did in the last book. She really didn't do the aftermath any justice. Keep up the good work, and God Bless!!

great story...mayb include lucius more...and a little more action...like duels or somethin with undiscovered death eaters