ErasigmaUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/09/08
Now I'm hooked! I personally like the bad boy-who really cares deep down- so I'm rooting for Rigel, but I look forward to the story regardless. Please update soon. |
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OctoberSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 23/06/08
IP! So good to have you back writing again! I was so glad to get the chapter alert. Reading your work again is such fun. I so enjoyed the familial scenes in the last chapter. Also enjoyed the irony of your AN at the beginning of this chapter, talking about how writing gives shocks to not only the reader. Too back JKR didn't get shocked by where her plots and characters were going, but that's another story...
Random thoughts:
Poor Milo...
Conner is just as sexy as ever.
Not sure why Maggie doesn't like her owl.
Amazing how rehooked I am to this fic after so long a time.
Come back soon!
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Author Feedback: Yeah that really too bad, the woman killed my mojo... *sigh* Thanks. I was so worried that everybody had gone away after my almost inexcusable absence. I hope to keep you to the end.  |
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That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
Author Feedback: Thank you, for this one and the last.  |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 29/02/08
Why on earth have you paused this story? It's soooo good!! Please continue it!! I would like to know what happens!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/07
I love your writing and your stories. Please keep this updated! I have it bookmarked and check all the time... |
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OctoberSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/08/07
This plot is really getting thick. At this point, I'm just along for the rollercoaster ride. Again, poor little Milo's situation is heartwrenching, and now with the Malfoys on the horizon...
Yeah, update soon! |
Author Feedback: Yep, the plot thickens, and I hope you'll enjoy the ride. Hold on tight, thanks.  |
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Well that was a strange conversation. Harry will actually let his daughter go to Malfoy Manor?? I think he is not actually thinking deeply about this. I mean he is really worried about Milo, so if Lillie wants to or is invited to something that maybe isn't so safe, he won't think it through because it may seem like nothing compared to the worries he has about Milo and his werewolfism. And I am wondering why Narcissa Malfoy is so eager to have Connor over too? And why will Snape be there???
Well anywho great job!!!!
Love Amanda |
Author Feedback: Yep, Harry's letting her go and only time will tell if that was a bright idea. (I'm working on that next update hard.) And since I have you wondering then I've done my job. Thanks. |
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AnatheraSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/08/07
ah a sequel yay! i know i really should break this fan fiction habit with school starting but i just can't i really liked the last one, hope you tie up some of the loose ends with this one good writing so far, and the ring was a nice touch, skeeter bashing grants bonus points in my books... |
Author Feedback: I know, I should be breaking my fanfic habit too, but do you think I can? I would love to, with school and my own original novel to do... Thanks. |
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Yes!!! That dang ring is back to normal.
I liked this chapter, I believe Hugo is good for Milo.
Lillie's comment to Rita was hilarious.
I like the Lupin house. It is... creative.
Connor's study is cool. I like the mugs, they're unique.
Love Amanda |
Author Feedback: Well, for now.
He should be.
Thanks, there was no way she couldn't say something snippy.
Yes it is, but how could it not be with Tonks there.
I like souvenir mugs so much I couldn't resist.
Thank you. |
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OctoberSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/08/07
IP: This is sucked me in even more than Part 1. I feel so badly for little Milo, hobbling on his cane at his age and knowing that he is a Squib to boot, even it it's not public yet...
Heartwrenching.
The H/Hr relationship is lovely too.
I'm glad you're continuing on. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad I have you interested, let's keep it that way.
I feel bad for Milo too, but well, I have no choice. Poor kid. Well, on to the next chapter. |
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cheepirUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/08/07
cute chapter, they all deserve some peace and happiness after all those going ons but i cant wait to read further about the real plot and milo! cant wait to see more of rigel and the others too 
keep it up, and update quickly !  |
Author Feedback: Yes they do, but where's the fun in that? Will try, thanks. |
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Well that was a good chapter. I was so excited to read this story. I can't wait to see how Milo is coping with this. I hope he's alright. Also I am excited about seeing the new Lupin house. I hope it works well for them. Great Chapter, the dialogue is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
-Love Amanda |
Author Feedback: Thank you, next chapter is on the way. I hope you'll like it too. |
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A very nice introduction to this story. This was an intriguing break from HP tradition, having a story begin with the lead characters taking the train home from Hogwarts, rather than end it that way. (Of course, it also evokes memories of the dreaded epilogue, but I won't go there.)
I have come to truly enjoy the interactions between Magnolia, Rigel and Connor. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them nor how young Milo figures in. It's quite encouraging to see this series continue and I'll be reading the updates every time I get a chance (which is way less often than I'd like).
Thanks for writing this! I know it's a labor of love, but I, for one, still greatly appreciate it.
ITL |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. I am going to do my best to make it worth your while, and updating every chance I get so this could work just fine. Working on the next update already. |
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cheepirUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/08/07
wow i've been waiting for this sequel for a long time! glad to hear that milo isn't really a squib, i was shocked by the title of this >< cant wait for more, but somehow i feel that magnolia would do better with rigel instead of connor =( anyway, good job and i hope you update soon! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, it's good to hear that you were anticipating this. I promise to make it worth your while then. Well, a lot of people seem to think that Rigel and Magnolia are better than Magnolia and Connor... I must be doing something wrong somewhere... hmm. Thanks again. |
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