That was beautiful and a very fitting end to this arc. I really enjoyed how you developed their characters, showing both the characters we know and how they've aged (and aged well).

*happy sigh*

Wonderfully and tastefully written as usual. And it's a fitting way to exorcise the demons of Canon Day - smut and fluff

Sigh! Is this truly the end then? I loved every moment of this chapter - perfectly captured family dinner with such deep affection amongst the siblings and of course, their parents. Yeah, you definitely steamed things up at the end - and made Mommy Hermione and Daddy Harry sex very hot indeed, and very romantic as well! I especially loved the moments after, especially this line "now, when he loved her with all the added depth and all the added wisdom that came from marriage and fatherhood—especially fatherhood, that had seemed to increase his capacity and understanding of love exponentially. " Sigh! Thanks for writing such an awesome chapter on the anniversary of the crapilogue - this is definitely how canon should've ended!!

That was a great chapter.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

Love your stories, and I'm happy someone is combating Crappy Cannon Day. Keep up the Fluffy Smut! Down with Cannon and JKR!

Awwww! That was a very charming chapter. I truly wish that the Harry Potter series did end like that. There was just so much emotions conveyed in that chapter. I don't think words are enough to express how supercalifragilisticexpialidociosus of a writer you are
I love the way you are able to put words together to show how much Harry and Hermione love each other and be able to get the reader to feel those emotions also. You are a brilliant writer.


Keep up the amazing work!!


Now I'm off to continue reading your marvelous works

Aawww that was soooo sweet at the end, soooooooo cute, sooooo cute!! KEEP WRITING I LOVE THESE LITTLE STORIES!!!!!!!!!!

great fic mate I didn't like DH or HBP either and I've always been a H/Hr fan

You have a wonderful knack for making your characters believable, with flaws as well as strengths. I immensely enjoyed the fact that Hermione wasn't a perfect Stepford mother, that she got frustrated and just plain annoyed with the things kids do, and she had to consciously restrain herself from snapping at them. I loved Harry reflecting on how he'd spent hours watching his daughter sleep, and why Emily was his favorite because she looked so much like Hermione. And the ambush was great!

Very, very nice! The opening line grabbed my attention and held it; you did a good job of tying it together with the end. I liked that Hermione could still surprise Harry, and that Harry had thought she couldn't surprise him anymore because he knew her so well. The red dress was described perfectly. I also liked the touches of uncertainty in this chapter, in particular Hermione not immediately wanting kids, and the reason she changed her mind.

Great chapter. It was fun to see the flip side of the previous situation, where it's Harry waiting and worrying and unwilling to accept anything other than Hermione living. I loved the Healer's point of view, and how he first didn't see why people feared Harry and then he did after everything else was stripped away. The scene with Harry reassuring his kids was great, and a good contrast to the scene with Ron where he didn't have to reassure anyone.

Again a brilliant peice of work! Congrats! I loved it! It was beautiful. Simply exquisite !!!

Yes, it was quite fluffy...but excellently written fluff!!
I loved every word - and anything that has Harmony love is fantastic to me! Thank you for taking me on this wonderful journey and I hope to see more of your work soon!

Really nice, and smutty, as always when it comes to your stories

That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.