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floomehere!
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 11/02/08
Oooh, a guess... Luna? She's adequately "strange" and knew he was from a different planet without having been told. Meh, I dunno about the colors, though.
 

floomehere!
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 11/02/08
Hmm, I can't wait to see what happens next. But who is the girl in the red and bronze cape? Maybe it's cause I don't know much about Superman but I dunno who that is.
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 11/02/08
well, the wait was quite worth it and this chapter was well worth the wait. *smile* I did indeed recognize bits from the first movie and I thought the names of Hermione's parents were quite appropro (tell me, did her father move to England from Kansas - I think I'd be a bit worried if he did). I thought the introduction of Alexander "Lex" Luthor was nicely done and I wonder how long it'll take Harry to realize more about who he is. Now, the very end with the introduction of Supergirl was something else and I'm looking forward to seeing who she is when she's not in uniform.
 

Bukama
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/12/07
Pretty wicked so far.
Are you going to continue the story that inspired you? As it seems to be abandoned.
It certainly gave me a new view on Hermione and Ron. One I've never considered before.
Though thinking about it I can see it but I also see Ron and Harry leeching off Hermione's smarts.
I can't see how Harry and Hermione leech off of Ron except for his offering a distraction to both in the form off a chess game and starting a fight with Hermione
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/09/07
Interesting story so far. I love how you made Hermione vulnerable and strong at the same time. Please continue soon!
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/09/07
Meh, re-reading found a small typo. "No harm no fowl,..." should be "No harm no foul,...". The dread "homonym monster" strikes again.
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
in addition to my earlier comments, I just noticed a samll typo: "... it was bore ..." should just be "... it bore ...", the "was" is redundant and un-necessary.
 

Rayclash
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/08/07
Goodie chapter there! Please keep up the good work. I really like this story!
 

LupisNoctis
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/08/07
Wow...The flashbacks were pretty intense. My heart broke for Harry when he came back to the Burrow and found out Ginny had married Neville, but this leaves him free for Hermione.

Great job on this chapter. Lots of information. Can't wait for the next chapter.
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/08/07
*chuckle* I feel like I should be whistling the theme from the first movie with Christopher Reeves while reading this one as certain scenes definitely resonate (then again, I'm old enough to remember watching the tv show in the fifties ). You've got a nice start here and you've answered a few questions I had from the first chapter. IMHO, this is going to be quite an enjoyable story, though you have to admit that, with his history, Harry will never be taken as a "mild-mannered wizard". *grin*
Author Feedback: mild-mannered Harry? you're right that's a task that's impossible to do. And you have good reason to whistle that theme, I was playing the Superman The Motion Picture and Superman Returns soundtracks while writing both chaps ^_^
 

Mister_Midnight
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/08/07
I love characters that fall from grace, only to climb back up into it. I think Hermione has the greatest potential to fall and fix herself out of any of the trio. To be honest, her actions surprised me, but it only creates greater character development possibilities. I'm looking forward to the next part of this saga. Great job and keep it up.
Author Feedback: Fall from Graces are fun to write especially with characters who are easily made strong enough to fight back. And with everything JKR has given us about Hermione, I think she can handle it.

thanks for the review more's on the way ^_^
 

kim
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/08/07
i really like this story. i cant wait to read the rest.great job on tis story. its getting better.
Author Feedback: thanks
 

shawnpickett
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/08/07
Uhm, you might've went to far off of the reservation with this one. Granted, I can see Hermione and Ron cutting loose a bit after winning, but for Hermione to need a paternity test to determine who Rose's father was? Nah that's just too far ooc. The chapter was well written, and I enjoyed most of it, but I suspect you were trying too hard to avoid the Ron and Hermione divorce cliche'. The problem is, some cliche's exist because they work. I don't know, maybe I'm nuts, but I just don't see Hermione being a slut. Even worse, Harry didn't jump in nearly forcefully enough and point out Hermione and Ron's roles in defeating Voldemort, granted Harry may have led, but they certainly supported him. Lord knows that Hermione was the moral compass many times throughout the books. Well, regardless, a well written chapter, even if I didn't agree with one of the plot points, I still look forward to seeing where you go with this story. Also, where are Hermione's parents? Did she just party hardy and leave them in Australia?
Author Feedback: there's a lot more to Hermione's fall from grace than what's been seen so far. It's actually one of the three big story points of the fic. The point I'm trying to show is all three, Harry, Ron, and Hermione have made some pretty bad mistakes and are now trying to repair the damage: Harry running off without telling hardly a soul, and Ron and Hermione following the sad but true young celebrity trend. and I don't see Hermione as a slut either, attending swinger parties (which to my understanding is somewhat popular in some circles in Europe) does not a slut make. Hermione followed the road of Lindsey, Brittney, Christina and Paris, but unlike those girls, she's made a U-Turn and trying to fight her way back on her own steam.

But unlike what one reviewer who didn't add his name or ID put it, this fic and none of the others are gonna die out. more's on the way from all the stuff ... except for Last Sage, that one's gonna be tricky lol
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/08/07
i would say this was a good story but you've made hermione someone completely unnoticeable, truthfully i feel a bit saddened at how you portrayed a very good character and made her into a commomday whore. She was unique that's what made her special and you turned her into one of these flouncy whorey girls we see to often these days. Also i really don't like how pathetic you're making harry, even as superman he seems weak. But my biggest issue is with your lack of focus cause i'm pretty sure this fanfic will die very son like so many others of yours have. You should really work on those before you jump to a new fanfic, shows lack of writing ability if you keep leaving a bunch of unfinished works.
Author Feedback: Hermione unnoticeable? commonday whore? Not quite yes she followed the sad but true young celebrity girl road, but the point I was trying to make unlike those she's realized she was going down bad road, took a bit of a shock to do it, but she's fought her way back. Harry I don't see as weak, he's simply messed up by leaving like he did and trying to find his way back into the world he left.

I hope you get this one, because I assure you none of my fics have died yet, thank you very much.
 

kim
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/08/07
great story so far. i loved the first chapter.i love the movie superman as well.great job on writing this story.cant wait to read the rest.
 

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