I felt bad for Ron in this chapter, but I believe he\'ll get over it. I also think he shouldn\'t have gotten mad at Harry for any of this. It technically wasn\'t his fault. I mean if he always knew she loved him then he shouldn\'t feel so bad. I think he was sort of a jerk and a wuss in this chappie. Which makes me mad that he\'s taking this out on them. But in the long run I think in this story Hermione and Harry make a better couple and that makes me

I felt very sad for Harry during this chapter. And I hated the Hermione/Ron & the implied Ginny/Harry pairings. I feel the characters are to miserable that way.

Hot, very hot, as well as quite passionate and achingly honest. Harry & Hermione clearly have a most intimate and intense bond that'll see them through a very long life together. I wonder whos' going to 'bitch, moan, and complain' more, Ron or Ginny? In any case, some things are ver clearly set.

Now her response was quite something, apparently Harry has been something of a "slow learner" here but I expect that's about to change. Ron's behavior is quite understandable, though he does seem to have developed a bit more restraint in his behavior; I wonder how long it'll take him to find someone else (be "amusing" to find he already -had- someone else).

Oh, man!! He's got it bad for her and, worse for him, he knows it; he's also sufficiently honest and self-aware to know that it's not just 'cause Ginny isn't there but something wholly different. It's going to be quite "interesting" to watch this evolve, though I reckon it's going to be a rather painful experience for Harry. OTOH, the potential benefits at the end would make it worthwhile.

one word. perfect. id leave it at that but i have to have at least 10 words

more crazy twists and turns. not really but i need points if im going to keep getting updates when you release more work

very nice set up for a smut filled snog fest that we all know is coming. thats what I like about you we can count on getting a great, quick story when we want to read about h/hr

That was an excellent story. I loved every bit of it, from Harry figuring out how dense he really is to figuring out what love ACTUALLY is to his and Hermiones expression of that love. Very beautiful story one of your best and I've read almost all of them.

Yeah, i can`t say it often enough, your storys enlighten my days (sounds cheesy or?), but so it is!
Thanks for them!

That was great! I totally loved it! What a well thought out and written story. Even the characters were spot on.

a bit redundant... but i guess it\'s good... i like how u described harry\'s feelings... rather confusing yet clear...

I loved it. You write really well. I have love all of your stories and hope to see something else from you sometime soon.

far out..u win the prize for attention to detail!

I like the way you portray their feelings for each other, how they've worked them out and how well they know each other seemed really realistic to me.

good stuff

Great stuff- I loved the kiss!! So romantic

Very realistic I think, tho a bit harsh to spring it on Ron straight away but I suppose they'd already held it in too long!

I like the way you write, some really nice words used effortlessly.