The very fact that JKR had to butcher her own story and characters to make the final pairings fit is all the proof I ever needed to justify H/Hr as right.

You're story was wonderful - shocking - but wonderful. Harry is a much better person than I. I don't think I could have so easily accepted the truths I was told when hurt in that particular fashion. But the very fact that you have him struggling to *stay* angry about that kiss in the face of Hermione's explanation is a wonderful way to show just how much he does trust her.

Thanks for sharing this!

wow!!! that was really very good! i\'ve never seen a plot like that i absolutly fell in love with it! it was really unique n harry n herms looked really cute on it! i haven\'t reviewed a fic here in a long time but i felt like i really had to let this out lol congrats!

I completely agree with your view of H/Hr. Personally, I think Hermione would get sick of Ron after a few... months. All they do is fight. Is that really love? It reminds me of my relationship with my brother than anything else. >.<

Lovely fic, by the way. Harry's reaction is a bit extreme, but then again, Harry is a rather extreme guy.

I Loved your fic! And I completely agree with you... no doubts ..H/Hr rules!

" Author’s Note 2: When I posted this, I wrote at the end that I had no doubts about the ultimate right-ness of H/Hr—and I still don’t. Even knowing about the disaster that is DH, I don’t doubt that H/Hr is better, is more right, no matter what JKR might think. (She clearly doesn’t remember her own canon anyway.) No doubts. To hell with canon. "


yes. yes. yes.

The hurricane of inspiration take your body and mind and make you produce a lot of stories (excellent, by the way)and we love everything you wrote and will write.

God bless your inspiration.

I really like Harry in this one. He´s brave so sure of himself, secure of your love for Hermione.She seems a little fragile, but like I said, she seems.

This kind of love... it´s a shame we will not see in canon. but that´s another story.

I´m very sad. upset it´s not the word to describe. it´s sad. because Things like these text you write are TRUE and not that...

but that´s another story.

don´t bother my sadness. my heal it will be slow.

congratulations. always.

telma.

Hello,

You have been one of my favorite authors for a while now. I read anything with your name in the author field.

Thank you.

another good piece from you,
I think someone said before HBP, JK is just ordinary writer who have luck and only that, so HBP and DH prove it. the whole series don't give any point for the reader. Friendship is nothing, Bravery is nothing, Love is nothing but Lust is everything, Insult is everything, Selfish is everything, go hell JKR,

Great story, loved it. And you are soooooooo right about JK/DH.

“Not if you’re just going to hex my bollocks off. If you are, we can talk through the door.”
HAHAHA this is so Ron!

great work! Loved it very much

As one of the few good line from DH that I can remember I shall repeat "Ear Ear" concerning yer thoughts about canon. Was what 'Arry and 'Ermione had fer all those years just too comfortable fer JK? Was strippin' him of his Firebolt, of Hedwig, of 'Ermione really required ter make him suffer enough? Was Ron returnin' ter the tent really necessary to be going on with? Was killing Tonks and Lupin without more then a mention ter them being in a pile of the dead, in a PILE, really how ter treat them? As yer may be able ter tell, I like yer vision of right-ness.

oh and i 4got 2 say good story! i just hope you write more of jealous harry, i love him like that!

Exactly to hell with the cannon, how does it matter anyway, they are imaginary characters anyway we can imagine them the way we want to! ;and so can jkr

Very nice piece, I'm glad you posted it here on Portkey since I've only read your pieces on here. Is there anywhere else you post that has pieces not on here? I really enjoy your writing immensely. I agree about H/Hr entirely...I'm sorry, I just never saw the chemistry that G/H supposedly had that led so many people to believe they were right for each other. Harry saved her life when he was 12...how many other people has he saved? Does it mean there's chemistry there? No. In DH where they leave the graveyard and have their arms wrapped around each other and how he felt no weirdness in them posing as an old married couple...that's real. Sheesh.

H/Hr canon still exists and all will be right as soon as that crazed heron fan releases jkr's family. Then the black mail will be over and she will release the real book.
LOL

Yeah screw jkr, h/hr was so prevalent in the books it wasn't even funny. What was funny was the forced scenes of h/h and r/hr come on they were so random no build up just bam this is wha happened. Once again great great story though i wished you made harry be a bit rougher with her or say something like "what if you caught me kissing ginny?" that would have been a good line. Anyway great work keep them coming.