hehe zombified females lol i loved it...even thought i have read this like 48384199432493857 times..makes me crack up laugh every time

Ahh... some fluffy comedy. Nicely written with some funny twists in the plot. The only complaint I have is that there could have been a little more development of emotions before Zach/Bella and H/Hr start kissing each other. It just felt too rushed ("hey I like you" *cue intense kissing*), I guess. But this was almost a year ago, so yeah.

Awesome... that is the only bloody word to describe this fic...i wish it wasnt a one shot... cant believe that u are writing such fics at the age of 15!!
u rock man!! seriously!!
awesome awesome piece...

I adored it! This is the second story of your's that I have read and u are well becoming a favourite author of mine! I love the way you write the humour by the way it is quite original and I alwaysget a laugh out of it. I'll be sure to read more of your stories in the near furture!

Cute story. I am glad that the little bitter boy cast the spell on Harry to make him realize that Hermione loved him and Ginny was a twit. Great job!

That was a very, very sweet story. I really liked it.

Good story, could have used the oblivious Harry when you said the true love or one who was not affected, let him be dumb and hermione smack some sense into him while being gobsmacked that this jerk beat HER?! ;D

What can I say, I simply love it! I'm definitely adding this fic to my favorites

I love it! Fluffness and humor mix together well. Great work!

Wonderful! I can't believe that I didn't read it sooner but oh well, better late then never!

awwee this was a good one.
my favorite part was when seamus turned out gay.
hahahah that was great
but it was really really adorbale.
great job on it ♥
it was amazingggg

omgsh :]] hehe i love this story it is amazing
and i absolutely love your
'My Urge to Tickle Hermione Granger' also hehe im glad that Ginny and him broke up.. ive never really liked her.. okay and back to
'Out of Breath'
this story is just amazing and im glad that they finally kissed :]] hehe oh andd...
you are just an fan-fricken-tastic-ly ah-may-zah-aing writer :]]
but now there over.. bumerr.
oh well i loved it
keep writing. cuz im gonna keep reading :]
much love
harryluver05 :]

i loved it!!! it was so well put together and te storyline went nicely. and it was so freaking funny! thanks for being such a great author, please write more stories for us!

THis story was fantastic!

I've never liked Zacharias Smith. I always thought that he was a huge jerk. I loved how you worked that into the story.

Bravo!

Too rushed. Zacharias and Bella outshadowed Harry and Hermione. Should have been more than a one-shot. Should have had Ginny and Harry\'s break-up. Other than that, great plot, great story.