hey^^
don't know what everyones problem is, but i really like your story
i love H/Hr and just want you to know:
don't give a fuck about what they say, 'cause if they don't like your story they don't have to read it
(just to let you know: i'm going to read your other storys and i hope they were H/Hr xD )
...okay, my english is....baaad, but who cares? i'm german xD
anyway, be happy and don't get mad, 'cause the people who write bad comments are just jealous and can't write ^^

so, bye then

Haha. I haven't read the reviews yet but sound like you're getting some flak.
Just wanted to give you some support and although adultery fics aren't great.. I don't really mind this one at all and don't think you deserve to be slagged! Maybe a warming in bold at the beginning for all those who wouldn't like adultery fics (that's how I feel about rape-fics, just warm me ahead and I'll stay away, which is funny because initial discussions between NAPPA and I was for Portkey to be H/Hr site with no rape-fics, I'm an old shipper)

But yeah, great work so far, keep it up.

hello hello... i bet that you thought i dissapeared off the face of the planet... well i didn't... let's just say that after reading the disaster that was book 7 i wasn't in the mood for5 fanfiction.... but then i saw that you had a new story and well i just had to read it... and it must be said that i truly enjoy how you are trying to fix said disaster previously mentioned... true characters are acting a little strange but its like you said... this is an adultry story... people are bound to act strange... plus things got all messed up with books 6-7... so i am not going to yell at you like some of your other reviewers... instead i'm going to congratulate you on a job well done... let me close with this... as long as you are writing fanfiction i will be reading and reviewing... i am that devoted to you...

candice

ps congrats... yor boys won the world series again... i am not bitter ... maybe my yankees can win next year!!!!

I don't think they are so OOC. The only thing is maybe they should leave Ron and Ginny now that they finally came to their senses about each other.

Good story...story line is getting very interesting...keep up the great work...love it!

Hmm. I like how everything's turning out so far. My imagination even got the better of me and thought about James and Rose falling for each other too--gross, I know! But it could be a really complex conflict. Hahaha!

love the story, is hugo harry son as well?
please update, i love it!
cheers

Rowling totally wanted to please the do-good readers of the series.
I absolutely love the 'real' vibe you give off on this story. One of my favorites!

I like this story very much.After I read DH, my first theory that came to mind was that they all cheating I mean they are married to Ron and Ginny who wouldn't cheat.

I honestly don't see how anyone thinks that they are acting out of character. People do have to realize that they probably have changed a great deal since they turned 17... it's a natural process in a human adult's life. *tries not to go anthropological* You've said that already though, haha, had to throw my two-sense in.

Anyway I honestly cannot critique you on this fic. One, I've not written fanfiction in ages, two,I abso-freakin'-lutely love it. Your writing style is excellent. I'm worried about Hermione and Rose with Fenrir being around...grr at the lousey bastard.

Anyway keep up the good work!

Hi !! I really like your story!
And you know....I finished the book when I was on a plane to england...xD and I was with a friend.. when I told her about Rose and all the children in the epilogue, we both came with the idea that Rose was indeed Harry\'s daughter! Lol xD really! and we were like making theories about it xD because Rose is the name of a flower like Lily and Petunia and you know stuff like that...xD So it\'s great to read a fanfic with that idea hehe
I hopw you post more soon

In regards to the characters being written out of context, I find that I have read very few stories where the authors have managed to write the character the way JK does.
I really like this story, keep up the good work and if the criticism isn't constructive, ignore it.

~JL

I enjoy reading the stories from the fans much more than the original. JKR loves to write fighting, not realtionships (other than superficial and Best Friends)

As for your story, I believe NAERYN sid everything I wanted to say.

For those who can't see beyond their own insecurities***** DON'T READ THIS Get a life...it is ONLY a STORY (a good one, but only a story)

How can Fenir know soooo much? He doesn't have magical powers....he can't listen from far away?? He must have had help! Looking forward to the next chapter. Don't let those "other" people get to you. Just start filtering the reviews, and none of us have to read their crap!

I'm going to say this once: I dislike affair/adultery fics. Intensely. Marriage is supposed to mean something important, and to betray that is to betray everything.

That being said, I love the way you're writing this story. I agree that completely ignoring the character development in Books 6 and 7 is like shoving your head into the sand while you fire off bursts from a machine gun at the phantoms you can't see: you always end up looking more than a little insane. Just because we don't *like* what she did to her characters in the end, doesn't mean we can't show their changing and moving past that hormonal "thinking with the wrong head" stage. Life is messy, messier and more complicated than JKR would have us believe.

Cool, I really dont think ur wrong, i just dont like betrail, but its personal, dont think the history is not good because of that...
But I must adimit that now Im really curious to know what will happen!