This is so adorable! I love stories written in the second person! Nice work!  |
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lvswthtSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/08
I loved it. Very short and sweet and straight to the point. I like that it was written in the second person perspective. Gave it a little extra something. |
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dinz86Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/08
Awww... so sweet, simple, and so very in-character.  I can really picture this scenario happening between them. Great job! You write H/Hr really well. |
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FiaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/01/08
He bought the villa, that is so sweet. But Harry is almost always sweet. Love your stories, not just this one... |
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/08
did i give a review for this one yet? i'm not tooooooo sure.. so anyway, this is so simple and easy to read, very light but heavy at the same time. I really enjoyed it's simplicity i just hope there's harry's POV  |
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This was a very emotional and poignant one shot. funny how it's so easy yet it took so long for them to get there? Le sigh... |
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awwww that was sooo sweet and cute! i really enjoyed this fic. im pretty sure this shud have been in the 7th book somewhere... |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/10/07
Very short but overflowing with fluff and good feelings Great job! |
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This was such a beautifully written story! Thank you so very much for sharing! I especially loved the line "It's the kind of love that William Shakespeare wrote about in his sonnets...etc" Yeah, I have always wanted that kind of love too, just haven't been lucky enough, I guess. Sigh. Nice when you can live vicariously through fictional characters, right? Anyway, I can't wait to read more of your stories. |
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a very sweet story. I like your writing. your style is so evocative that every line seems to bring forth a perfetly formed image in my mind. i feel like i can understand exactly what hermione means when she describes love although i'm not sure i've ever felt it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed it |
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Wonderful Hermione POV. Beautiful story, made me smile. It's perfect that Hermione finally realized it's always been him, I guess she always wandered around acknowledging it=) |
Author Feedback: Thank you, am glad you enjoyed it and it made you smile |
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Hey!
Wow! I've never read a story quite like this one. Congrats on successful create a second person story lol must of been a bit tricky.
-Ginnie |
Author Feedback: Second person can be a bit tricky, and sometimes hard to read, which is why I don't do it often. But I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/07
Nice and well written, I definitely enjoyed this. Hope you'll wirte other stories soon!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you, am glad you enjoyed it. |
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sertadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/08/07
This was just fantastic, and I really do mean that. It had me awwing quite a few times, and the last lines had me chuckling to myself and grinning quite stupidly. :] |
Author Feedback: Awww, thank you! And the last line is really how it should be, isn't it?  |
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I loved this. Really loved this. (I seem to say that all the time, but rarely do I mean it!) No, this was excellent. The writing flowed beautifully, I sat up a little straighter in my chair, and just thought how perfect it was.
Good luck with the competition!
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Author Feedback: Thank you for your very kind review, I'm glad you enjoyed it |
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