Old ChuckUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 05/12/08
The last line of this chapter sums up at least one experience of most of your readers - at least those whose families and friends are occasionally friendly-tense. Most of us, however, lack the perception to see it right away.
You surely beat up on Harry and Hermione. I can visualize Harry being so out of it that he alienates her almost irrevocably — oh! no, that was the Joey incident.
Keep it up; I like it... Old Chuck |
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Old ChuckUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 05/12/08
The last line of this chapter sums up at least one experience of most of your readers - at least those whose families and friends are occasionally friendly-tense. Most of us, however, lack the perception to see it right away.
You surely beat up on Harry and Hermione. I can visualize Harry being so out of it that he alienates her almost irrevocably — oh! no, that was the Joey incident.
Keep it up; I like it... Old Chuck |
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this Was an awesome story. I had forgotten all about it but I was glad to see you had updated it! The whole Fleur being pregnant was great to get Harry and hermione in the clear for the time being. I hope you are able to update agin soon sometime!  |
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AlejaUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 02/12/08
This is a very enjoyable read and I cant wait for the next chapter. |
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great job! i cant wait to read the rest of this story! keep up the excellent work on it and Happy Thanksgiving! |
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haha. i'm glad its back.
thanks for updating. it was really cut.e  |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 17 | Date : 25/11/08
Nice chap, and I agree with Ron that Molly will be thinking of babies for nine months from now so they should be in the clear, when the baby will be born they will have been together long enough for molly to be used to it anyway. |
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it is nice to see that this story is humming along. can't wait for the next chapter. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 23/11/08
ahh.. great chapter, I'm really happy for bill, fleur harry and hermione! Your charaterisation of mrs. Weasley was spot on and funny to read. looking forward to the next chapter!! |
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AshlieUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 23/11/08
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Bit of a dull update, to be honest. Not really a lot happened. It was all right, I guess, but not up to the standards you've set with the rest of the story.
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Author Feedback: I know, and I apologise profusely for that. It wasn't exactly my favourite chapter either, but I felt I needed ti give the trio a bit of a break. I was going to end the chapter with them going home and finding Rita on the doorstep, but I'm going to save that for later. More will happen next chapter I promise.
Thanks for reviewing, it's always appreciated.
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witowsmpSigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 23/11/08
That was an entertaining chapter. I certainly don't blame Harry for realizing he only wants Hermione to be the mother of his children. I loved her line about the only time Harrry is eloquant. |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 16 | Date : 20/11/08
It was wonderful to read a new chapter to this great story. I was quite amused by the trio's reluctance to confront Molly. She certainly can be a bit much to tolerate at times. Glad to see the other Weasley men have tried to lend a helping hand in dealing with the situation. Can wait to read what happens next. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 16 | Date : 19/11/08
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Great job! Wonderful! Definately worth the wait! I can't wait to read the rest of this story! Keep up the excellent work! |
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