i wouldnt mind seeing an epilogue to show what happened to everyone...maybe not too far in the future, but enough to tie up the loose ends i guess...

that is only if u dont intend to write a sequel ever

Might i also add, considering this is your first fan fic, the complete lack of plot holes for such a complex plot is really impressive! Normally when poeple try and write such a detailed story there are so many plot holes! Might i also add it seems to a be a recuring motif that people stayed up late to read this, this is also the case for me!

Well congrats, you just took about 5hrs if my life, but i loved it! Though i must a Harry Hermione epilogue would seal the deal!

hmm... i think Melissa\'s the bad guy...er...girl! and Tilly maybe. hm... i dunno

wonderful story. had me on the edge of my seat for most of it. i do hope you keep writing. i usually don't like post voldemort stories. after voldemort, not much should be a challenge for harry. but voldemort's daughter, great idea

Once again Bravo. This was amazing as well. Again, I spent many nights without sleeping. Although you made me cry again at Harry and Hermione's angst, I really enjoyed it. I hated Ritchie from the beginning but ended up loving the guy but not enough to want him to stick with Hermione. I was baffled by who the Cardinal could be and like a good writer, you gave many suspects but in the end it was the least expected. Great job, kudos! I loved it and I again hope to read more of your stories.

Well that really sucks. So we don't know anything about Ron or how it all ends. Bleh!!! Great job at this story though. I really enjoyed it. Now it's time to go to bed (at 6 am!!!!)

You should do an epilogue.

Well that was interesting. I wouldn't've have known that Melissa was it. She didn't seem like that important of a character. Hm...I thought it would've been somebody different. Why did Gomez call her Terry...strange. wHATEVER.

Well that just sucks. I wonder if Harry was suppose to die from lust and Ron from Anger. I do want to know who it was. Maybe it was Terry Boot. Nope..that wouldn't make "Saint Lambs Homes" i'M JUST GOING TO reade the next chapter.

Well that wasn't what i WAS THINKING. Hm...losing her magic..well I had some little inkling when she wnated to lost the thing. Hermione is stupid for Harry thinking anything less of her. Whatever. Interesting job.

Well that sucks. I really wish I could've seen what the memory was. I do hope that you expose it to us at sometime. Great job.Lovely lovely job. Very nice how you put that relationships are built on trust and harry finally succame to it.

That was a great job. I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope that we can find out why Hermione took so many potions. Did she have sex with Dean numerous times? Wow..this is all building up so much suspense!!!!....

That was a very interesting chapter.Hm..Voldermort having sex and having a baby. Wow..who would have sex with Voldermot. I wouldn't want to have that creepy snake thing seeing me. Maybe that woman had something for the Parsletongue..lol. Great job.

This was a great chapter. I do hope that Hermione leaves soon. Why would she go into work when she is wanted for murder? Oh Hermione, she can be quite stuipd. That is sad that Ritchie had to deal with Hermioen and Harry fighting. Very great job at this...and what is the task that Ron told him to do?.

Well this is interesting. At least they have some inkling who T.M Didler his. Great job. I bet that Tom from the bar is the Cardinal..would make a lot of sense. Great job.