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i love this sequel and i really think that you should make another sequel of this one because its' kind hanging and i want more.btw, u rock!!! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/01/08
Well, I read both this and the previous one. I think it's highly strange that no one believes them. I mean, how could they not? Maybe at first, because Hermione is not this stunning beauty, and there are hotter girls, but blimey, after months of telling them they are dating, people would get the point. After all, it isn't like it's not obvious that they love each other.
Now, if they were fighting like rona nd Hermione do, then I'd believe people to have an hard time grasping that they were really dating...   |
Author Feedback: They (as in Ginny and Seamus and Dean) need the proof that they're dating by means of snogging constantly, bragging about how wonderful their shags were, etc. Not the emotional intimacy, but they want the physical intimacy. Harry and Hermione, obviously, want to keep the physical aspect of their relationship (the sex, the snogging, etc.) a personal matter, when they have privacy.
Haha, and maybe its the fact that HHr were so close to begin with, that they barely saw the transformation from friends to lovers. Y'know what I mean?
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/11/07
I like Luna in this! And Neville!
I find myself liking those obscure characters.
Anyway I also like obscure ships like I'm into Neville/Parvati, you've wrote Seamus/Pansy before and I thought why not? But I think in this Neville and Luna really earned their status in the Trios gang. You portray Luna perfectly, like Luna being so passive when she gets picked on.
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Author Feedback: I've always loved those two. 
Yeah, Luna's a beast. So effing awesome, she is. Though I'd like her to be with Draco, like just cause. 
Seamus/Pansy is kinda cool, innit? I liked it.
Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I love this fic! Go Roonil Wazlib! I dislike Ginny as well.
But it was sweet and vague, a thing not usually well done.
And I see the logic in making it 1998. Them being in school and all.
Boy if Hermione came in pregnant McGonagall would be pretty ticked of ("Miss Granger are you hiding a Quaffle under your jumper?""Er yes?")
Excellent fic SwishAndFlick31!  |
Author Feedback: Roonil is pretty awesome at times. Jenny needs to die, though.
thanks! |
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This really was the first Harry and Hermione fan-fic I ever read and I instantly loved it.
Yes I do think Hermione would get pregnant to hold on to a bit of Harry (am I wrong that I love Hermione having Harry's posthumous children?)
I actually could picture Harry and Ron in a dusty attic, I pictured Hermione snuggled up to Harry in the end, and I pictured what Ron did to Seamus which must have hurt (hey I'm Irish like Seamus but come on, he was an idiot in OoTP).
I love Ron and your fanfic made me like him even more because Ron is such a fierce friend really (besides THAT incident in DH ). He was great in the main story of No One but two as well, smiling that his two friends were alone.
It really was beautiful entirely. You really should continue this but if not then this is enough. Gosh your stories are like Pringles
"One pop and you can't stop!"
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Author Feedback: Wow, I'm glad I didn't make you resent the Harmony ship, then. I prolly would've been stoned to my death.
I like Pringles.. Haha now I want some. Maybe when I get them I'll think of writing it.
Thanks for the review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/10/07
I think we need another chapter. You are doing an excellent job at this story, and I hope you do continue it. I will cross my fingers. Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!! |
Author Feedback: YAY, I keep on replying to you, in like everything! WHOO!!
Uh, anyway.
I don't know... I'll see. ...
Thanks for the review! |
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I love this and the first part. I really wish you'd continue it. I know "they" don't care about the reaction of their friends when the baby comes, but I'd love to see how Seamus and Dean and Ginny react when they finally see that Harry and Hermione are very much in love and have a baby together. Plus, I want to know if it's a boy or girl. A boy seems more appropriate. I'm not a Ginny fan either! I enjoyed her embarassment, lol! Great work! |
Author Feedback: Haha if you want to, go ahead. I just might, actually. I don't know. I KNOW I said a definite 'no,' but I've learned now not to trust my own words. Well, when it comes to finalities for stories, anyway.
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I really liked that, I personally think you shoud continue this story line, I am really enjoying and I REALLY like Ron's character. I completely agree with you about Ron, though I actually like Ginny, but I understand why so many people don't. |
Author Feedback: If YOU want to, go ahead.
I hate Ginny. That's the only thing.
Thanx for the review! |
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I loved this story. I don't suppose that you'd consider writing another chapter. Maybe about their baby being born. That would show the nay-sayers that yes H/Hr are very much a couple!
Please. Just one more chapter. Please. Pretty please. Just think about, okay? |
Author Feedback: Haha, I'm sorry, but I doubt I'll be writing a chapter. I wanted people to think of their own endings, whether they thought that H/Hr actually had the baby, if Harry lived/died, if HERMIONE lived/died, etc.
Just, in my book, my brain, whatever--Ginny dies, Harry and Hermoine have triplets--one that's Harry's mini-me, Hermione's mini-me, and a little girl with green eyes and brown hair--and Harry dies. But Hermione has his children, and his love, blah blah blah, you know.
Harry goes to King's Cross and comes back from the dead, and they live HAPPILY EVER AFTER!
:-P That's the chapter, right there. Almost like an essay. Why write pages worth of dumb details when you can explain it in three sentences.
But, if YOU want to, go ahead. Though I doubt anyone would want to take up one of my horrid stories.
Thanks for the review!
SwishAndFlick31 |
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kimUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/08/07
hey i truly liked the epilogue.to be honest i dont like ginny either.but your story was really great. |
Author Feedback: Don't worry, I hate Ginny. I hate her with a passion. A white hot passion that doesn't even match the flame of a thousand white hot suns.
Thank you! |
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dexter19Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
well you're not the only one to hate ginny then crazy stalker fan girl . she wasn't with harry on any adventure and she got the hero what the hell?
atleast this is much better to read and ron i like him when proves he gotta brain and uses it. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I think JKR was in her period when she wrote book six, and then during book seven she was just like "Oh. Shit. Now I have to write H/G cannon!" I mean, the evidence is so totally there! Just look at the locket scene! Voldemort! I mean, we all know who HE ships! And guess who our Voldemort is? That's right, JKR is! And guess who she ships?! WHOO, YEAH, THAT'S RIGHT!  Sorry about that.
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I totally know what you mean. I hate Ginny with a passion. I wanted her to die a violent painful death in the last book! Ron kind of.....well, maybe matured towards the VERY end. But in general, I'm not fond of the two youngest Weasley's. |
Author Feedback: I just hate Ginny. There's no passion in it.
Mmm... Ron, I still like him. He does prove to be worthy - but his moodiness is a major turn off--and majorly hard to write!
Thanx for the review! |
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In my book, Ginny graduated to skank when she made that crack about Hermione embarassing herself by talking about Quidditch, so I agree with you, Ginevra Molly Weasley, charter member of Sluts-R-Us (I'm not just a spokesperson, I'm a client!), Gryffindor voted Mostly Likely To by the boy's dorms, and Draco Malfoy's preferred 'Chamber of Secrets'.
I'm afraid I don't share your opinion of Ron. I actually expected him to sell Harry and Hermione out to Voldemort; his abandonment and then return to the quest would've been the perfect opportunity. That would've made it possible for Percy to rescue them, restoring his honor in the process. Maybe I'll write that myself one of these days...
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Author Feedback: I don't think Ron is brave enough to actually face Voldemort. I really don't. And there would be no possible way that Ron would be able to actually even GET to Voldemort. He wouldn't know how. He could try Snape, but Snape was actually loyal in the end, so there would be no way that'd help. And Ron wouldn't be able to think of anything clever. Not really bashing him, but you've got to admit that it's true.
And besides, he wouldn't be able to give their location away. Just as Hermione said, it's bascially unplottable. That's why Ron hadn't come back. Cause he couldn't. :-/ Whatever.
I'll be waiting for you to write that story. I'll be sure to leave you a review. Just make sure it's Pro- H/Hr.
Thanx for the review. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
Totally agree with you about Ron, but Ginny used to be okay. Then the sixth book happened and she totally turned into a, erm, you know... But she used to remind me of myself (im a redhead too!) But now I loathe the thought of being compared to her! This is a good story, I think it should turn into an actual one, it can have a good plotline. Keep up the good work, the world of fanfiction is all we H/Hr shippers have left! Go Harmony! |
Author Feedback: Ginny only used to be okay because we never saw her.
Maybe you should dye your hair? Haha, jk. I have nothing against redheads, just redheads whose last name happens to be "Weasley." Then it's time to get the pitchfork and H/Hr fanfiction out. Oh yeah, totally.
Thanx for the review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
this is really cute you should deffently continue i want to know what happens nexts!! |
Author Feedback: Sorry, I'm not continuing. But, you're free to make your own conclusions. |
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