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Excellent use of the theme and great characterization abound in this one-shot. You should be quite proud of yourself. (Oh, wait. That's one of the sins. Never mind.)
And now to finish A Tale of Winter... |
Author Feedback: Ah, one can't be good all the time, no fun.  Thanks. |
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SearcySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
Very eloquently done. I loved the use of the seven deadly sins and I thought the last three words were quite a nice touch. Outstandingly executed. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
*Laughs* Oh, now that was a delightful work and a most enjoyable read. I thought tracing the influence of the different sins was a rather nice touch. I loved the interjection about -how- Hermione found out about that book; 'plausible deniability' is a most excellent thing. |
Author Feedback: Yes it is indeed, isn't it? Thanks. |
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A very nice one shot.. rather original idea on Harry becoming "Lockhart" and "Malfoy". I like the way the story flowed.. how you handled their emotions.
Cheers!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you, my hard work paid off. |
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aziSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
That's a new (at least for me) that they kind of hated or had huge problems with each other and then thay're together, I Loved it! Totally believable and I liked the fact that Harry wasn't perfect and that you described the story with the seven sins It was great |
Author Feedback: I've been wanting to do a story featuring the sins for well over a year now. Thanks. |
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Huh! I have to admit that this fic was highly original and interesting. What can I say? I loved it! The tone was as light as air and made the story a joy to read. Thank goodness it was a happy ending; after all, I do love the Weasley family. All in all, it was a thoughtful, clever story that I would definitely have to look through again if I have the time. Thank you for posting this! |
Author Feedback: Thanks a lot. Do read again. |
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FacadeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
I have always been intrigued by the seven deadly sins so I automatically clicked on this when it popped up on the front page. and i didn't get disappointed! I liked how you handled them even though the gluttony one is a bit of a stretch. But then again I can't picture Harry with a huge Mac burger, hahaha. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I know about Gluttony. I was struggling for hours on where to fit it in, how to work it into the theme I had running and then I eventually settled for the last part about the family. That sin worried me the most. Very glad you liked it, thanks.
Hmm, Harry sitting in McDonalds. That would be a sight.  |
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tokenSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
perfect. the best I've read so far....I'll be looking forward to new post DH fics from you  |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm planning to write more. |
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I'm a bit flummoxed by this one. It starts out WAY out of character for both, then gradually rolls into character, or sorts.
I liked the last half a lot though.
Nice job with the sins. I'm rather partial to them myself  |
Author Feedback: Oh the characterisation, a bit of artistic license, maybe? But for Pride, knowing that Harry can't really be considered proud, I was working with the jerk he'd become in HBP. I really hated HBP Harry, still do in fact. And he redeemed himself only mildly in DH, to me at least.
Glad you liked and read it still. I must admit that I may occasionally commit a few of them. |
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Awww I loved it! It was great... I'm glad the weasleys forgave them, I hate to read fics where they stop being friends because of all the things they've beeen through... great story! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, couldn't let it end without reconciliation either. I may dislike some things about the Weasleys, but I can't work without them. I'd miss 'em too much, especially Ron. |
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JustAGirlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
Wow, what a neat little story! I really liked this, it was a very intense read. I can hardly believe it's as short as it is, but in a good way! You crammed a whole lot in there, which would normally be overwhelming, but somehow you made it work and this story is just fantastic. I love the 'seven deadly sins' idea, the theme definitely helped move your story along. All in all, an awesome job! Thanks for the great read! |
Author Feedback: You're welcome, glad you liked it. I had to put a lot in because I was determined to keep a one-shot, so I'm glad it paid off. |
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someguySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
Well played, well set up. That's the Hermione we know, not the underpants washer from DH. An excellent one-shot overall. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, that underpants-washing thing jarred every time I read it. And often the word associated was "EWWwww!" Why in the heck is Hermione washing Ron's underwear? Why?
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NympheUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
Wow! That felt like it took a lot of work to get it just right and it paid off. Real life can make anyone a pain-in-the-behind, but sometimes, we do wake up. |
Author Feedback: It did, I laboured over this fic for two days and then had to rush it to finish it. About time they woke up indeed. Glad you liked it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
Wow. Thanks. I was really starting to get down on the whole H/G thing. Thought it was played out and quite trite by this point. Thanks for making Hermione as unlikeable as possible (next to cannon of course -- nobody deserves that bitch). I'm off to SIYE. It goes without saying that I'll run into my share of Harry hating fangirls over there as well, but this story put me past my quota of rediculous H/Hr. I'll try portkey again after you get off the first page of updates.
Unless this whole thing was a joke. Then congrats. Had me fooled. |
Author Feedback: O-kay? What? I'm not Harry-bashing or Harry-hating, I'm working with a prescribed set of themes and what I interpreted of Harry's character in canon. And Hermione's insistence on telling Harry the truth rather than agreeing blindly is somehow something to be disliked? So if he was going off the bend, driving drunk, getting into fights, taking drugs, she should sit back and be quiet? If he's acting like an arrogant prat, as his friend she has every right to and should call him on it.
And even so, from what I've read, the Harry of canon in the last two books has displayed some less than likeable qualities not too dissimilar from what I wrote about here. If you disagree and believe that I'm just bashing--which, let's make it clear, I'm not, I thought on that at least I was clear on--there's something called the "Back" button. I'm a big fan of it myself. |
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Oh my! I LOVED it so much!! I think you did a great job with each of the sins. I have to add this to my favorites list. |
Author Feedback: Thanks a lot! |
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