CryHopeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/08/08
Truly Brilliant. Love it. You evolved the characters that we were left with at the end of DH into characters that I could actually care about again. |
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omg this was an amaing fic i am so glad that i foudn it, thank you for sharing it! |
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susanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/12/07
Great story, very well written. Can't wait to read more from you.
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/07
yes, all was WELL.. and this is how the end of the DH should be! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/07
Whoa, this was fun to read, although for most of the fic I didn't like how Harry and Hermione acted toward each other. Seemed almost like they ahd turned into a fighting couple of teenagers just like Ron and Hermione are in the books, and I hated it. But apart for that, it's fine. |
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CarlaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/08/07
wonderful! it's always nice to read a well-written fic that's canon-proof (at least up to the epilogue, heh  ) and not weasley-bashing. this was really good, and i loved how you crafted it around the capital sins, that was very ingenious. extra points for righting the "sirius" situation (oh, that was a baaaad mistake by mrs. jo, it was baaad.) this is definitely going to my faves. great job! |
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i think i read this befor.e lol./ but it was wonderful the second time. ohh. i loved it. truly did. it was espectacular. fabulous job. XD |
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Wow, I like this story. I hope you will continue it!
-Amanda |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/07
Sweet! I loved this story! Shows the true nature of what someone could be if that one person wasn't there to keep you grounded! |
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scilaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/07
After Deathly Hollows I started searching for the perfect fanfic, ¿you know?. I needed something like "the gift" by Danielerin, which succesfully cured me from the Half-blood prince's disaster.
I wanted a well-written, angsty but with a happy ending fic that stated why oh why Harry and Hermione (THE TRUE HARRY AND HERMIONE!) are perfect for each other.
I can't thank you enough for writthing JUST what I needed.
Since I read the last book there was no way that my imagination could picture a true ending for this series. Now I can.
Thanks again and sorry for the mistakes |
Author Feedback: Oh the mistakes are not, I've got tons more. You're making me blush though, so thanks. |
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heatherUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/07
This story is just brilliant.
I read it twice and I'm willing to read it again and again.
I read most of your works and I have to admit that this is the best story you've ever written.
The characters - mostly Harry's, as it's his POV - are far from perfect but that makes them human and they are psychologically well constructed.
I like your idea with sins as titles and I love these accurate sentences at the end of each chapter. Even the bit with "all was well".
Thank you! |
Author Feedback: Oh, it's good to hear how much you like it. And do read again, I worked really hard on it.
Thanks. |
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this is perfect! I like the backdrop of the seven sins (well, H/Hr was Voldemort's ship apparently), and how it could really end up H/Hr and still not lose the Weasleys.
Oh, if only DH ended this way!
I also enjoyed the way you played off the other arguments against H/Hr - like how Hermione always harps at Harry and all their major arguments, and how they are boring, and all that.
Great! Great! |
Author Feedback: Well, since apparently their being together is an evil thing, why not wallow in sin, no?
And those arguments, annoying really. How can you consider Harry and Hermione boring when Ron had to stop fighting with Hermione to become her boyfriend? Who's having the snorefest now?
Thanks. |
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sertadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/07
I really liked this and the idea of Harry shouting to the world after the birth of his son (I'd never thought of having Harry name his son Cedric -- great idea!) is oh so very cute! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, but I must admit I ripped it off of Lupin... but then, I can't see Harry not doing something like that. |
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Excellent use of the theme and great characterization abound in this one-shot. You should be quite proud of yourself. (Oh, wait. That's one of the sins. Never mind.)
And now to finish A Tale of Winter... |
Author Feedback: Ah, one can't be good all the time, no fun.  Thanks. |
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SearcySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
Very eloquently done. I loved the use of the seven deadly sins and I thought the last three words were quite a nice touch. Outstandingly executed. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. |
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