OHMYGODDDD. You kill me with this fic, kill me! It's amazing. I was actually planning on writing a fic similar to this that took place during those lost hours of Harry/Hermione Tent Time following the mess at Bathilda\'s (and if you still haven\'t read the book, you have no idea what I\'m on about lol) that ends up with Hermione memory charm-ing Harry, but yours is SO MUCH BETTER! *dies* Good lord I loved this. I want to read all of your affair!fics now haha. Good work! |
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Oh. My. God. Loved it! Pure angsty goodness! Seriously, this tore at me, all the emotion and the feeling and ahh. So damm good. I've been rec'ing this to all my H/Hr friends LOL.
I'm chosing to pretend the fic ends here and go with this as the real ending because damm, just that good.
I don't know what you feel about continuing fics that you've finished or whatever, but I'd love to see H/Hr like years in the future, just kinda have this look and for their memory charm to break or something and for them to remember this time, and what they did. Or even better, for like just one of their memory charms to break but be unable to do anything because they can see how happy the other is not remembering. So they chose to sacrifice the own happiness for the other again. LOL, it's like torturing our favourtie characters once again, but oh it would be such a good read.
But if you're completely done with this fic, I'll just imagine that's what happened lol.
Anyways, once again, loved it! It was all kinds of awesome. |
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AundielenSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/08/07
AH that's exactly the pain I felt after reading Lori's Someday, only this time it's REAL because it's actually CANON. Oh man. And you captured the moment wonderfully, I loved the bit with And even if they never remembered it, it had happened; they had had their chance, fleeting as it had been—and maybe, just maybe, that would be enough...Until some other life, some other universe, when they could be given back this gift they’d discovered. |
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AundielenSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/08/07
Absolutely beautifully written. I loved the last bit at the end, hearing heartbreak in a voice. And yes, even after it all, Hermione would still automatically turn to him for comfort. |
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micmacUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/08/07
**Sighs** awwww.... this one\'s really sweet. when i finished reading part2a, i felt like strangling you... that a really, really, really sad thing for them to do, but it was nice. i actually preferred it than this one since it sort of became and harry/hermione at the same time remaining \"loyal\" to the book. but whatev.... i love DH but i\'m way disappointed w/ the epilogue (it would have been much much better if jk didnt include it, eh???) but there\'s always portkey for us harry/hermione loyalists!
waiting for another story from you soon!
 micmac |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/08/07
Okay, okay, you're forgiven. And it is, of course, far superior to the Crapilogue--I really like that nickname, I may have to steal it now. It really sums it up perfectly--pity, too, since I actually enjoyed DH right up until the ending.
This was great. I liked how Neville was the first to reach out, and how he was so matter of fact about it. Ron coming to the realization that it had always been Harry and Hermione was very nicely done, and I liked how he wanted his best friends back even if he couldn't forgive them yet. Very nicely done. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/08/07
It wouldn\'t surprise me a damn bit if this is what happened before than horrible Disney-ish Crapilogue. Forget the Herons and Chocos.....DO WHAT IS RIGHT JO! Dammit, damn her. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/07
Whenever I think about DH and I get hopelessly sad, I just come here and read one of your fics. You\\\'re a million times more talented than JK Rowling and I wish you\\\'d have written the books...the way they should have been. I hate her sometimes...for not seeing it, not seeing what she created. I don\\\'t like hating her.....but I do. She let me see a glimpse of something so beautiful, so incredibly amazing....and then slammed the door shut. Why she did that, I will never know but it hurt more than anything in a long time.
Thank you for all the beauty and love and imagination you\\\'ve created. It says mountains when a fanfic author is leagues higher than the author herself in pure talent. |
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Yeah yeah yeah...
I supose it would never come back... enterely at least...
But... ok, better this than nothing! ha... |
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what about their kids? lol I'm very picky. It's sad, JK killed it for us, the chance of being friends again if Harry and Hermione got together, but I guess she left it all in the hands of wonderful authors like you. I loved your story, I really liked both endings, though I have to say I liked the last one more (I know, I'm crazy). Anyways, great work |
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NariSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/08/07
I forgive you! I love the way Ron just accepted it, it was only right that he do. I also adored neville. It was so sweet that he tried to comfort them through his letter. it was a special ending, I love the fact that you gave us a choice |
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hahaha, vengeance is sweet... God I still can't believe we didn't sail! It actually hurts  This was terrific, I loved it, and I could feel their despair, so sad... it was great, really |
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NariSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/08/07
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Awww this is terrible! I mean, it was great, but poor Harry and Hermione! I don't know what JK smoked when she wrote that epilogue lol but this is like 1000 times better than it...  |
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I'm just leaving a review because this is the first post-DH adultery fic that I've read and not hated. I actually liked this one. Very well done.
I liked the idea of the first ending better (maybe because I'm not a sucker for happy endings), but the second one was better executed. |
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