Wonderful. No rush to sex or any other such thing. It was about friendship, love and caring. One of the hallmarks of the Harry & Hermione relationship. I see by the publication date of this fic that I\'m a bit behind the times, but it\'s quite excellent.

JKR made such amistake with this scene, It could have chanegd all of the chemistry and IMHO would have made the ending that much more emotional, with the Huroxes the hallows and harry's sacrifice in the forest!

But we aren't her so... we have fan fiction and the hope that maybe... maybe she'll look into a few of these and reaccess her views!

dennsiud

I read your story again... God help me it touche my heart every time...

So... i read your update for bearings...is there going to be one for G.U.G? Because that would be sweet.

Anyways,
Thanks again for a wonderful story.

GM

that was so beautiful. and so true to Jo's writing style, and true to the books if she'd actually paid attention to her own canon. omg. I think i just shed a tear.

That was very heart-felt and lovely If we petitioned to have DH re-written, you should be the one to wirte it again.

Hey there Matt!

I know you said you don't read alot of other fan-fic but have you read "The tent" by Wilkes?

I thought your story would have been the perfect beginning to that story.

I'm actually very sad this is only a one-shot
I would have liked to see more...

Is bearings also a year 7 fic? Because if it is has this same level of beauty and heart, I might have to read it....

OK this review is dragging on a lttle bit and i'm sorry about that, so I'll just say what i need to about your (sadly only a) one-shot...

It is beautiful, honest, heartfelt, warm, emotionally stirring and i love it so much I think I'll probably be quoting it for the rest of my life. The pace and flow of the story are perfect. You actually showed that Harry has emotions beyond anger and flights of fancy or lust... The more i read, the more i realised that you weren't going to make them declare their love for each other, but because your writing was so good, it was okay.

In short your one-shot ( ),
was...
perfect


Sincerely from Iraq,
GM

Aw so sweet!!!! It doesn't even matter that they didn't officialy kiss. They are so sweet together! Brillantly written! I am on to more of your stories

Definitely what should have happened. It's almost amusing with how hard JKR had to work to keep them apart.

i thought that particular scene should have been the start of something beautiful.. not extravagant but simply beautiful..

Oh, so beautifully done! I think, this is one of the best tent scenes that's been written after Ron's left. Definitely enjoyed it

I was so close to start crying, you did an excelent job, I can't think of the words to describe how I feel right now, for me this is what should have happened. It was just amazing, Congrats for the great story and the amazing writting.

Breathtaking... We finally see Harry think about how important Hermione is to him. She is his reason, for living, for fighting. Pity JKR couldn't write the truth though.

Excellent
Gol

Beautiful. Wonderful. Heartbreaking. Absolutely stunning and achingly lovely. This definitely is a piece of work that must be recognized.

oh, this was perfect! it was exactly how i pictured this missing scene to be-- them comforting each other over the loss of ron, over their anger at voldemort, the war and their fate, over all that they had to left behind, over their fears. not a snog-fest, just a feeling-fest. i especially loved the last part, about harry feeling hermione's lips on his throat... i could see it so vividly this is the best rendition of this missing scene i've seen so far. fabulous, great job!

Amazing and very realistic chapter! Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Keep up the amazing work! Please update again soon! Tiffany