quizgirlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/01/08
Nice story, and very sweet. We need more Ron and Luna stories out here. Keep it up  |
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I am either very, very dirty or very, very slow... but was the glue bottle intended to be a sexual innuendo? o_o;
(I have a feeling my mind is just... way in the gutter) |
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Now that is so cute! I love Ron/Luna! And yeah for subtle H/Hr. I like how you show them together, but they don't take the focus away from Ron and Luna.  |
Author Feedback: Cute is my middle name.  R/L all the way  Glad you liked the story. |
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Very cute, Ron certaintly does have a quick change of heart, doesn't he? |
Author Feedback: Thanks
Ron does have a quick change of heart...when has he ever been devoted to anything other than food and Quidditch? |
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pippy0505Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/07
This was a sweet story. I thought it was funny when Luna spent more time watching Ron than doing anything else. And of course Ron would get the hang of cutting the cardboard, lol! And the glue bottle scene was definitely memorable. *wishes there were more Ron/Luna fics* |
Author Feedback: Ill write the occasional R/L fic...should the glue bottle show up again from time to time?
Glad you liked the story. |
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This is really rather lovely. I love the way you write Luna. |
Author Feedback: Thank you You can expect more of Luna coming up, and she will be present in the Full Circle story I'm currently writing |
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SaicaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/07
Wow, this was a nice one. I had to say that I enjoyed the bits between Ron and Hermione, as while I dislike the romance they had in canon, they make for the best friends. The ending, however, wants me to think that there's more, but I'm not sure. It's a great story either way, and great for laughs.
Keep up the great work! |
Author Feedback: RH would be great friends...the end of the story does hint towards more...I could expand it to a second chapter, but right now I'll keep it as a one shot
Glad you liked it though .I'll certainly keep up the great work. |
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I REALLY like the idea for this story, and I love Ron/Luna, but... a cardboard box? That is an art/craft? I love the way this has been written, but really, could you have an actual art/craft? Try mosaics, or finger-painting, or clay sculptures. Sculpture work has potential. They would have to use their hands, and then there is the subject... |
Author Feedback: Ah, well....I was gearing towards something basic, seeing Ron has no experience with crafts at all...but I agree, sculpture and mosaics would have been a better idea...it's one of my shortcomings as an author, not giving more thought towards a better idea like that...but I'm still glad you liked the story |
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