johannaUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 02/12/07
again, you handled it really well. i'm loving their fun loose banter with each other.
gosh, HARMONIAN ROCKS!!! |
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johannaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/07
aww, sloshed harry is so adorable lol
you handled it really well and i'm glad you didn't overdo his slurring or anything like that because i hate that in fics
but you did good!
really, really cute oliver! |
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i really like this story... that was so adorable with Harry and the little broom |
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hahah!!! That was hilarious!!!  I love it!! That's what I call a birthday party
You HAVE to make more chapter, your story is incredible!!! |
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HAHAH!!!  I love this one!! Harry is TOO funny drunk
Great Job!! Can't wait to read more!! |
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alruneSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 30/10/07
oh my, that has to be one hell of a sight... harry riding a mini broom (pictures knees bent up to chin, scowl on his lovely face)... lol nice job! -aj- |
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I LOVED that last chapter. Sweet and DANGEROUS!Hermione!!! Love it! Hope you update soon. |
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aryayushSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 20/10/07
Please continue writing! This is an awesome fic and you are a fantastic author.
I only have one request though. Please don't wander off into the lives of the Potter offspring in later chapters. Most post marriage fics tend to do that and it is rather boring to have to read those. It is like an alien story. We want H/Hr interaction, like in this chapter. Witty, romantic, heavy with sarcasm, fluffy - the works.
Thank you for writing this great fic! Please keep it up!  |
Author Feedback: oh by all means, i totally i agree with you. there won't be a chapter WITHOUT harry or hermione and all the chapters are pretty much based around their thoughts that the kids are getting into.
thanks for R&R!! |
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hp-n-hgSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 19/10/07
i love it the last scene is so funny i hope you update soon your a really good writer hope to see more of this story soon |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 18/10/07
too cute. Harry on a training broom!! He will NEVER live this one down. Pictures to prove he was on it. Hopefully Jamie will take off and have a great time.
I like this story...you should keep it going. Good luck with all your stories |
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ha ! ! ! ! ! ! !
loved it !
harry and hermione forever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever |
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Hey
I'm always happy to review another writers' work. I love this story because it shows what family is for Harry and how much it means to him. You've done a great job with it and you ought to be really, really pleased with it.
I hope that you continue writing on this story and the others that you've created. You have alot of talent - too much to keep it hidden.
Regards,
the_scribbler
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Absolutely hilarious story so far - especially this chapter - flying around on a baby broom, indeed. I would like to see a couple more chapters, continue the story a bit. Totally loving it so far. BTW....your other story "Harry Doesn't Know" is one of my all-time favorites! Keep the stories coming!!  And please update this chapter soon! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 17/10/07
I loved this chapter. I can't wait for the next update. I hope you write another chapter soon. |
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*squee* You gotta update soon! I loved that! Will Harry fall? That seems to be the question of the moment... |
Author Feedback: haha, of course he does.
thank you for reviewing! |
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