This chapter had me cracking up! It sounds like you write from experience regarding reasoning with a pregnant woman...aka, nothing the man says is ever what she wants to hear (or what he thought he said). I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

That was in a word ...


HALARIOUS!!!!!

I reallly Needed that!

Now to read more!

dennisud

this is really sweet. i really wished this is how DH turned out.

"How about Hugo?"

"God, kill me now."


ahahaha that little segment made me chuckle

this was an adorable chapter! i loved the whole idea about the photo album, the lilies poping out, the ring and especially the 'marry me?' part writing itself in the book.

so there ya go, i left a 'bloddy review'

Harry smiled at her, "Now that you mention it I'm ravished. I reckon I should get down to the cafeteria-"

that line had me cracking up ahahaha great job

this is just an adorable story! i'm glad its just not one of those "harry and hermione get drunk and confess their love for eachother and have sex" stories. great job

Oh that's rich! That's a picture I'd like to see in the Gallery!

You got a good feel for the mood swings a girl would go through. Nice work!

Very original proposal. The Lilies were a nice touch. Presumably you were thinking of Harry's mum.

aww, harry the poor dear. i can picture him now hunched over on that thing, floating a few centimetres off the ground.

HAHA!

i made a mistake reading this whole story through one sit- i haven't been able to start laughing. the sad thing is that i should really be getting ready for work but i just can't seem to pull away!

haha hahaha hahahahaha!!!
finally is write! this chapter was so good, even with the few moments of drama laced in! fantastic!

hahahaha, your jokes were off the rocker in this chapter! you have a really good sense of humour and i can't get through one of these chapters without spitting up a drink

oooh, the idea for a victory day ball is really cool. and the proposal was sooooo ROMANTIC!!

how do you manage to write these wonderful stories and be a bloke all in the same package?!