OMG! I loved this last chapter as well. It's horrible that Ron is gone, but H and Hr's love came out of it.

I love this story, for multiple reasons.

A) It's Harmonian. Duh.

B) You complain about length of the chapters. But remember, the number one rule in writing is to say the most with the least amount of words, and you do it perfectly Besides, your style of writing is similar to mine, and if I'm write, when you come to a certain point, you know that it's time to stop.

C) It's sad, but has promises of happiness.

D) I had a reason, but I forgot, because it's late.



E) MORE! MORE MORE MORE!

Awww..tragic but wars are never nice and not everyone lives in the end.

I loved this chapter. No wonder you had so much fun writing it. It's great. You should be really proud of this work.

I'm going to continue to look for your writing in the months to come and hope that you will continue to put up stories. You have a lot of talent.


Regards,

the_scribbler

I can't wait for the next chapter to see how it will end.

I enjoyed this story . the emotions are shown very nicely in this chapter.The story is very good but a bit sad and angsty. Keep updating

That was just wonderful! I loved how you managed to capture the essence of both their feelings changing for one another after the war. and yes, i loved how you managed to kill ron off, leaving the two of them to be alone. HAHAHAHA!

eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

i'm enjoying reading this story so very very much! i hope there are lots more chapters to come

That graveyard scene was very, very moving. I can't imagine how that would feel. You did a great job with it and it really clinched the story for me. Please don't stop writing!!

Regards,

the_scribbler

yeah i threw up in my mouth with that disgusting r/hr scene, this even if she gets with harry just feels hollow, second place really is just the first loser which you turned harry into. great job doing that, cause we all know ron definitely is number 1...ok sarcasm off.

i like your story.i feelbad for ron dying though.but i hope harry and hermione get together.this story is really good.i cant wait to read the rest.

that last paragraph is really nice. i think i'll store it in my fav. quotes file! keep it up

Harry hates Hermione because he loves her? Talk about an idiot! Love is one of the greatest things to have in this world, and Harry just keeps on pushing it away like an idiot...... will he never learn?!

A great new chapter, and I hope to see more in the future.

I like it and can't wait for the next update to see what will happen next.

i don't just like it, i love it, please make more, i think it's very interesting, i'd like to see what hermione was feeling durring her time in the hospital with harry next to her well done