Ahh, I think that fairy tale is going to crack soon. And to think, with the current law, if Harry or Ron wanted a divorce, there its done, and it seems Ron certainly does, but probably not to the detriment of his wife, because she is one of his best friends. Excellent story so far, keep it up!

This fic has hooked me! The chapters are snapshots of time, leading up to what I assume will be an angst-filled path to H/Hr.

There is one typo:
"...her eyes narrowing in dreadful disbelieve (disbelief?) and annoyance."

Gah, when do we get to read what happens next!?!?! There are a few grammar issues in this story, which makes it a bit hard to read, but it's Fantastc otherwise - I can't get enough of it! Can't wait for the next intensely emotional installment!

i found this while idly browsing, and was intrigued by your concept - so far it is excellent, well thought out, good dialogue
thanks for sharing, and I am looking forward to seeing where you take it.
warm regards

sad start - I am looking forward to see how you handle the break up. Will your ginny be as vicious and blind as most other break up fics?

I hope you will be able to continue this soon
thanks for sharing your skills

*wince* Methinks Ginny just did an oopsie that's going to be self-fulfilling in making her worst nightmare come true, and she really doesn't have anyone to blame but herself. As for Ron, it looks like he badly needs his oldest male friend and has him for what he needs. I rather suspect that he'll be there for Hermione, too, and *that* will likely be the final straw for Ginny, especially with her temper. I don't think life's going to be at all easy for any of them for a fair while, and Molly's sure to make a difficult situation worse with her personal emphasis and demons.

Beautiful story so far. The feelings, emotions, conflicts and problems are just what you would expect to eventually come out of the inexplicable pairings JKR had set out.

But hey, Harry Potter is a tragic tale, and who said that the tragedy ended with along Voldemort's demise? Perhaps what's even more tragic is the failed lives they lived after the war... doing what was easy after all, not what was right.

Again, a wonderful fic and, so far as I'm concerned, right on the money. Bring on the well-deserved angst!

Alexus Dracius

that was great ! ! ! !
cnt wait for the next update
Are you still working on Soul Pieces ? ?

Harry and Hermione Forever

This is turning into a damn good story, if it were a book I couldn't put it down. Keep it comming.

I never liked Ginny anyway, I always thought she was just tacked on at the last minute. And the whole Harry and Ginny relationship always felt wrong to me.

God, it's so sad, sad that it comes to this, best friends losing so much

Damn, for a minute I thought the story ended right there! I almost cursed out loud, I gotta know what happens next!

Hi,

I just found and read the first 4 chapters of your story, I just wanted to say how great I thought is was I really like the way you have portrayed Harry, Ron and Hermione.

Keep up the good work

Great story! I like the plot of this fic, very original. Can't wait for your next update.