lampessaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/08
She could read him like a book, knew him better than he knew himself and he had practically just sworn to her three times that she would always come first in his life, so obviously he was crazy for thinking about kissing her. That wasn't someone you kissed... right...?
Hilarious. |
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ACKKKK, what happens next?? Great story but you should definitely continue it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/07
Really good story
i love stories about Harry and hermione
and teddy
U rock!!!! Keep it up
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i think i want a sequel. i never ask for much, but here, ohh, i would love to see one. it was really lovely. nice work.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/08/07
please, please don't leave it like that - please continue it.  |
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heahruneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/07
Lol... It's so light-hearted and swift. And sadly, so unbelievable. If only fanfiction was canon.
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Author Feedback: Yeah, if only. Thanks. |
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That is so *cruel*! You can't leave me hanging there, of all places!!! Aaaugh!
Oh, this is so GOOD! Teddy + Padfoot is so much cuteness, and Hermione's jealousy made me smile and get all teary-eyed.  |
Author Feedback: Sorry about that, but stick around, am continuing. Thanks. |
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Oh very well done! But, don't you think this just screams for a sequel? Because it's so very good, and the dog idea was so very sweet and Hermione being jealous is so very funny and Harry wanting to kiss Hermione was so very... right. And you wouldn't want to disappoint your fans now, would you? |
Author Feedback: Oh it does, and I'm preparing one now. All that cuteness should not be allowed to go to waste indeed. Thanks. |
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Aha! So Harry is having interesting thoughts about Hermione? And Hermione is definitely not happy with her current life. I do hope you're planning on continuing this? I definitely am looking forward to another chapter. |
Author Feedback: I am actually, one really can't let Harry and Hermione suffer... Thanks. |
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wonderful!! but please more more, I know its says it is completed, but can't yopu add a little more? loved it! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, as a matter of fact I am working on more. Should be up soon. I hope. |
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I likd it. it was cute. but watch out for fernis wolf. he'll come round, read this, tel ya its against portkey rules and you have to continue it. so dont be surprised if he replys and says that. or someone else does. sooo....ya. but good job. muuch muuch love |
Author Feedback: Oh thanks, but I think I am going to do a sequel as a pre-emptive strike. I was kind of wondering about that to the end anyway. |
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Author Feedback: Actually I'm thinking about it now, thanks. |
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RayclashSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/07
Ah, a very good story here for only one chapter! Thanks a lot for writing this! keep up the good work!
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Author Feedback: Thanks. |
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It's too sweet! The banter between Harry and Hermione is great! Very believeable! And Hermione being jealous? I love that! I wish would could have seen Teddy get his puppy! Lol! Keep up the amazing work! Tiffany |
Author Feedback: Thanks, but would you believe I almost completely forgot about Teddy and his puppy in the end? Bad of me I know. Glad you liked it. |
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bipsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/07
So not done!.... this definitely deserves a follow up chapter ... the part about padfoot was heartbreakingly sweet  ... one more please...
I'll agree with your above thoughts.... Of all the 30-40 post DH fics floating on portkey, i follow just 3-4 stories and authors.. the rest just seem like a way for the shippers to make themselves feel better.. i rather read stuff that completely disregards DH, than some far fetched twisted version of it.. |
Author Feedback: Oh I do intend on doing one more like this, like I said I had a plan and deviated a bit. I just hope it'll be liked as the others. On to the continued disregarding of DH! Thanks.  |
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