You made me cry with all the Angst and beauty.

I haven't seen one like this in a while!

This looks like it will be a very good story.

--He and Hermione were the only two that existed; the rest of the world was mere black ink, smudged meaninglessly across a blank canvas.--

Excellent. You have a lovely way with language and metaphor. That particular line stood out for me enough to make me forget the story for a moment and contemplate the loveliness of the language.

I'm not keen on bittersweet. I don't know how I feel about what happens in this story. I do feel that it was the sheer force of Harry's determination to stay with Hermione once he knew life would be useless without her that allowed him to keep his promise to follow her where ever she went.

Nicely done.

I was wondering... Have you ever read or watched "The Notebook" ?

I can see some similarities...

Very nicely done...

That's it?? No more chapters?? I guess that is the end then. Good work, and God Bless!!

Hey cool story. well written. YOu use good adjectives. keep it up.

Way to go, keep on writing, it is obviously something you excel at.

oh! this fic is so sad, it made me cry! I love it, thank you for writing this.

This is a very nice bitter-sweet tale. I was close to tears by the end but not in an entirely sad sort of way. It was sad for those that had been left behind but happy for Hermione and Harry as they were now somwhere together beyond pain.

I'm crying my eyes out. I can't even see the keyboard right, I sort of memorized it already. great work. it was just. a favourite. love. what it can do. i was just thinking about it, how one loses sight and then they cant hear nor taste a thing. thats how you know someone is going to die. omg. it was beautiful. truely one of the most beautiful stories ever written. and they never left each other. i don't want to stop writing, but i have to. you are just wonderful.

\"How?\"

That took me completely. The story. wow. I\'ll keep reading. Great work so far.

Umm, my hands are kinda shaky so I'm actually surprising myself about all the typing. Your fic was beautiful and sad. I don't remember crying like this for a long time. Though plot was a little cliched, it was done beautifully

This story was written very well. But... I'm not sure I can say that I liked it. Or rather, you did a wonderful job of making me feel the pathos of Hermione's situation, and Harry's decision. I just tend to feel more ambivalent about sad stories. I'm afraid I've never been a fan of the catharsis idea. But, well done, excellently written. You achieved your purpose in writing the story.

I am sure the writing was excellent, a bit wordie(is that a word?) for me in the start, and of course I didn't like the ending. I guess it was too deep for my taste.

omg that was shock...i just assumed that she would be cured or something...wow...that was really good, very well written...it was a good end, very realistic...its like im happy but im sad, but sad happy..lol a bittersweet ending...