Sorry to say but I hate how you did the entire delivery scene. Especially when both parents are together, it is my opinion that "Dad" should always be part of delivering "Mom"'s child (even if it includes a broken hand or two, a dozen swears, a few death-threats, and an oath to never have sex again). To me, that was just REALLY impersonal.

awww...that was lovely!!! you make the greatest fluff fics in the world!!!! i think you should make a sequel for this!!!! keep it up!!!! i want more of ur stories

I think that was just fine for a sequel. This does do a decent follow up for Simply Nine Days. Though it doesn't seem to be Jacob centered as he doesn't make an appearance until the end it certainly is full of Harry and Hermione's relationship and it's still parenthood driven. Also, maybe Ginny and Draco, or Ron and Luna wouldn't have relationships at all if not for the assignment from Simply Nine Days. It's nice to see how they are all doing a couple years later.

Now, all you have to do is make a story out of all this. You really need to do Draco/Ginnys' kid, Ron/Luna's kid, and how they turn out. It would be a great story, since you ended this with a cliffie...lol. Hopefully you do more stories on this story...did that make sense?? Keep up the good work, and as always....God Bless!!

ahh, that was so totally and completely sweet, I absolutely adored that. Lol, I think it is great that they all ended up together, lol, did Seamus and Pansy end up together to rotfl

Great story/elpiloge. You did a good job! When are you updateing even after time? Great Job!

That was a brilliant sequel. You still manage to keep things light and funny, but at the same time sweet

That was awesome ... YAY for the fluff ... I want more of H/G ... I mean Harry/Granger.

Keep the good work going !

It was really cute. I liked it. The ending was sorta funny. Very, very fluffy.

I liked it, a lot. Simply Nine Days was one of the nest stories. I loved it so much. I can't wait to see something else from you.

I like your pen name too. Swish and Flick... hum... it reminds me of flipping off JKR as I am reading Harmony fics! Love that! All together now my fellow delusional people: Swish and Flick! *falls on floor laughing*

PJ

PS: Write, Write & Write!

Brilliantly awesome! I just read all your stories, except the paused one, I love your style. You don't find many authours who right stories like you do! Hope to see other stories from you!

Nice and fluffy sequel that fits well with the original story of yours. I can feel for Harry, though, as I've done enough job hunting over the years and it's tough even when you know what you want to do. The trick for him is going to be finding a decent paying job that he enjoys and that doesn't exploit his name. The story does match what I've heard from friends about their first and it's nicely written.

Very cute. This put a smile on my face. Thanks for that.

As for the Harmony ship, It will keep sailing with added wind in the sails and it will keep cruising around the waters of the Undying Lands so we won't ever have to bother with *shudders and gags* canon anymore.

If canon is rational, I'd rather be delusional!

Keep on writing. Smile in delusional defiance every time you hit the submit button and we'll all be here to thank you more for it.

This again was adorable.

Thanks
PJ

Brilliant!!! please keep writting this story and do the sequel!