AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
I liked it a lot. This was awsome. I hope to see something else from you soon. |
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That was freakin' awesome! Thank God there are still people like you writting amazing fics. So what if this entire site is now AU, that's exactly what fanfiction is for. Great writting and hot little one-shot! Loved it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
AND THAT'S what I call a story!! Bing, this is exactly what I needed to read after the disaster that was... the DH Epilogue!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more stories. I'd love to read story of yours that goes on for a few chapters! I'd even save it and print it out for my library. You're a FANTABULOUS writer and very inspiring as well!
Peace,
Elle |
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auserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
This actual plot behind this fic was a bit silly, but you managed to overcome that with very strong characterization. It would have been easy to make this cartoonish or absurd, but by keeping their personalities in tact, you gave the story a lot more life and interest.
It was a nice break to read something that was quite cheerful in its own way after the deluge of angst, too, so I'm glad you posted this. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
I thought this was a good story. I liked the idea behind it. I also love the fact that its harry/hermione. I love that people are still writing even though they know how the books end. I'll always love harry/hermione. |
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Nice. Way to find a silly smutty exucse. a poison? lol. thats kinda hilarious but you did good! fun to read. muuch muuch loove! |
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Aww so good. You really have a way with describing the more smutty pieces in a way that captures the lust and the love. Well written. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
Absolutely beautiful. I love your stories but I think this is just about the best that you have done. |
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HaniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
That was hot, I love it! I've read some of your stories before (sorry I didn't review  ), and they are great. So glad I found portkey. So thankful for authors like you. Please keep on writing.  |
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atiqahSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
Its true its true. Rowling sucks more at romance and smut than Hilary Duff at singing. Hence I'm glad you're still around.
Hot and sexy as always. |
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Well, yes, the scenario was totally contrived... but.... I think we can forgive you. Especially as the rest of it was absolutly freaking brilliant and totally hot! Love it! |
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
I loved it. I think we all needed that after that horrible epilouge. Keep up the good work. |
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*tackle glomps you* You are amazing, you know that? Your fluff always leaves me grinning like an idiot. Strangely enough, after reading your fics I always feel the urge to prowl around the house and pounce on my unsuspecting husband. Not that he minds  In fact, he now encourages me to read fanfic! LMAO
Aww, great job darling. I loved it. This line: "He’d trusted her with his life for so many years now; it was only natural to trust her with his heart and soul as well." sums up everything about our ship. *hugs some more* |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
*snicker* Someone is going to be so surprised when their poison doesn't work as expected and, instead, Harry appears very much in an intense relationship with Hermione. A very nice, and well-written, piece of hot but fluffy smut. If you were so inclined, I suspect you could add a few more chapters of story to expand on aspects of the backstory to this work. |
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