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That took me so long to read. I've been much too busy.
Very nicely written though. Congrats.
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yet another gorgeous story - JK definitely couldn't write that kind of smut! thanks for this update - looking forward to reading more of your one-shots soon |
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lierianSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/07/07
A very hot sexy steamy and emotional scene between our favorite lovers. I looooved this fic! Especially when Hermione tells him “It’s you and me—it’s us. How could this not be more than just a shag?” Favorite line of all time.
Lierian- who always adores reading your fics. |
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/07/07
Hmm... Sex Poisen, eh? I wouldn't mind to have that kind of poisen  A romance smuff story  is what I needed today  Good job! |
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robn46Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/07/07
Hey a really romantic story. Not to say an awesome fic you have written here! I just came across it by mere coincidence and couldn't stop reading. Anyway, I have you on my favorite author's list now and this story is going into the favorites too. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. Needless to say the Harry/Hermione ship is always good. We have to keep going on. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
I liked it a lot. This was awsome. I hope to see something else from you soon. |
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That was freakin' awesome! Thank God there are still people like you writting amazing fics. So what if this entire site is now AU, that's exactly what fanfiction is for. Great writting and hot little one-shot! Loved it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
AND THAT'S what I call a story!! Bing, this is exactly what I needed to read after the disaster that was... the DH Epilogue!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more stories. I'd love to read story of yours that goes on for a few chapters! I'd even save it and print it out for my library. You're a FANTABULOUS writer and very inspiring as well!
Peace,
Elle |
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auserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
This actual plot behind this fic was a bit silly, but you managed to overcome that with very strong characterization. It would have been easy to make this cartoonish or absurd, but by keeping their personalities in tact, you gave the story a lot more life and interest.
It was a nice break to read something that was quite cheerful in its own way after the deluge of angst, too, so I'm glad you posted this. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
I thought this was a good story. I liked the idea behind it. I also love the fact that its harry/hermione. I love that people are still writing even though they know how the books end. I'll always love harry/hermione. |
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Nice. Way to find a silly smutty exucse. a poison? lol. thats kinda hilarious but you did good! fun to read. muuch muuch loove! |
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Aww so good. You really have a way with describing the more smutty pieces in a way that captures the lust and the love. Well written. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
Absolutely beautiful. I love your stories but I think this is just about the best that you have done. |
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HaniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
That was hot, I love it! I've read some of your stories before (sorry I didn't review  ), and they are great. So glad I found portkey. So thankful for authors like you. Please keep on writing.  |
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