Well, this looks interesting! This Lennox girl, is she the daughter of the soldier who helped fighting?? I don't remember...she would have to be older than Danny, right? Well, until next time!!! |
Author Feedback: Yup, the Army Captain who helped fight in the movie is her father. She's the baby that he was trying so desperately to get home to. As for her age, she's around a year or two older than Danny. thanks for the review |
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Well, that's an interesting twist. It's nice to know that Harry was able to put paid to Lord Megatron in one on one fight. I suspect if they meet in battle again, that Harry won't ask for or give quarter (I was shocked that he did this time, honestly). The bit with Bellatrix/Black Arachnia was a bit of twist. Though it bodes well (or is that ill?) that Lord Megatron won't make the same mistakes Megatron did. Bellatrix is a nut, but at least she isn't a backstabbing coward like Starscream. Good chapter, thank you. |
Author Feedback: Harry was a powerhouse as a kid, 20 odd years later he's bound to be one of the most powerful in England. and I have a lot of plans for Black Arachnia, she'll definately be fun to write and hopefully for you to read. |
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kimUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 16/09/07
great job. i cant wait to read the rest of this story.it is awesome. |
Author Feedback: THANKS! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 16/09/07
Nice, so Bellatrix is back too. This is definitely going to be fun. |
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LeolupinSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 16/09/07
BlackArachnia, Bellatrix eh? I'm wondering if this incarnation of BA will follow in the same foot steps as her predicesser. |
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Another great chapter. I loved the first bit with Hermione checking out Harry to make sure he was ok...sure. LoL. We know she had other things on her mind besides just making sure Harry was alright.
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!! |
Author Feedback: Subtle, unconscious flirting is always to write. thanks for the review! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 30/08/07
“If you believe your despair can challenge my courage, come and try.” This was too good!
Good, so they got Harry out. And the radio is keeping Scorpius and his friends occupied,
This story is really awesome, can't wait to read more!
P.S. I see from the list of your other stories that you love crossovers. I'm not so fond of them, but who knows, I might be tempted to give them a shot someday... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/08/07
Yoo Hoo! Bumblebee and Optimus to the rescue!  Sorry aboutt hat but I just love those two!
As for the rest of the chapter, I bet now some convincing of the Minister will have to be done before Harry's thrown into azkaban... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 30/08/07
Oh, nice, the whole gang is going to take action now! I knew Harry couldn't have done it! Great, Bumblebee and Optimus Prime are my favourite characters in the movie! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/08/07
Whoa...why is Harry being framed for the killings?  *goes to next chapter to find out* |
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What a great chapter! The rescue was so well written! I can't wait for the next update. |
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I loved it!! When the Autobots transformed in front of everyone, I got chills. LoL.  So very well written!! |
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WooHoo!! Optimus Prime to the rescue!!
I really love this fic. I recently saw Transformers and fell in love with it. To you see you integrate the two stories together is great! |
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What?!  No way there's got to be some sort of explanation or something...I'm so glad that the next chapter is already posted or I would die. I don't know how the others handled this cliffhanger. LoL. |
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kimUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 14/08/07
great story so far. i am a huge transformers and harry potter fan. i love this story so far. |
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