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A Day At The Park

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/09/09
Yikes. Love this, I'm normally not a harry/hermione fan. You're doing this so well though.
Author Feedback: Well I am pleased that you like it so far.
 

q.thews
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 05/09/09
Nice story.
Even if you may have (or not) gave us a hint about Harry profession i really think this story lack in that area, even if in a passing comment knowing what career they choose would make them a little more real (you have a good characterization)... and don't come here saying that not even JKR revealed that ;-)
Ciao!
Author Feedback: I didn't realize that I hadn't hinted at Harry's profession and you are the first to mention it. Wow I guess I just assumed it was understood that he was an auror. Sorry for that and thanks for pointing it out to me.
 

q.thews
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/09/09
Thank you, thank you thank you.
Seeing them grow apart or even "enemies" would have been tragic, while this is "only" sad but in a nice way.... if this is the way it is going ;-)
Ciao!
Author Feedback: Glad you approve.
 

q.thews
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/09/09
I just hope we aren't going to see a fight with all (or part) of the Weasley family nor some Weasley bashing.
That said it is quite a nice start.
Author Feedback: I think you'll be pleased with how thins turn out.
 

Geans20
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/09
Awesome. I really enjoyed reading a story with a positive portrayal of a Dursley. It makes sense given how they parted ways in the 7th book. Very nice lead-up to their coupling!
Author Feedback: Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed the piece!
 

HarmonyLover
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 26/07/09
I enojoyed this story so much, particularly your characterization of the reformed Dudley. You always get the hint, at the beginning of DH, that he has the potential to become a decent person, and you really manage that here. I also like the way you re-worked the Epilogue into the ending - it's very cute and well done, and plausible given the relationships you've established. Thank you!
Author Feedback: Thank you for taking the time to read my story and to leave a review. I am glad to hear that you found the story plausible. I am also pleased that you like my characterization of Dudley. His portrayal in the final book made me wonder how he would have turned out if we could have seen more of his transformation.

I am glad you enjoyed the story and thank you again for taking the time to read and review.
 

)2oyal
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 20/07/09
Now that was just absolutely great!
Fantastic job with the detailed descriptions of Harry and Hermionie's feelings.

Definitely deserved first place in the competition!
Author Feedback: Thank you. I am happy to hear that you enjoyed the story and I appreciate your thinking it deserved to win. But I am still floored by the reception it received.
 

Caitlin
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 20/07/09
Oh my! Ginny handled that pretty well. Can\\\'t wait to see what\\\'s up next.
Author Feedback: I wnated to experiment with a kinder gentler Ginny or at the very least one who ones when to quit.
 

patsh
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 04/07/09
I've read this story probably a dozen times in the past six months or so, and it gets better every time. Your portrayal is exactly how I see Harry and Hermione in a non-epilogue, post Hogwarts setting. I also greatly enjoyed the growth of Dudley as a character, and his movement towards a person who actually has value in Harry's eyes.

The growth of all of your characters is treated very well, and I look forward to future re-reads. Thank you.
Author Feedback: I am happpy to know that this piece has been so well received by you and I hope that you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Until next time happy reading.
 

darrel
Unsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 02/07/09
Very good. great story line. My first portkey story. i will look for more of your stories
Author Feedback: Thank you, I am pleased to know that you enjoyed it.
 

PotterChick958
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 22/06/09
*bawls* That was such a perfectly adorable ending! I absolutely loved the look into Harry and Hermione's life 17 years down the road and seeing how everyone turned out. I loved Jilly's letter at the end. I can completely see why this story is award-winning. Simply amazing. I am so glad I found this story and read it! I feel so much warmer within my heart. Congratulations on an amazing story!

Love, Amanda
Author Feedback: Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it so much.
 

PotterChick958
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 22/06/09
So lovely to see Ron and Harry make up! I feel like Ron is a great influence in Teddy's life, and it is nice to see them all go to the park together, reconciling their friendship.

Love, Amanda
Author Feedback: I especialy liked writing that part.
 

PotterChick958
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 22/06/09
Harry and Ron hadn't really spoken prior to the break-ups? Wow. Did they simply grow apart in their older age? Harry is right - they were best friends. How could this have happened? Hopefully out of this relationship with Hermione, Harry and Ron will some how reconcile and slowly become true friends once more.

Love, Amanda
Author Feedback: It was more to do with their seperate jobs and being called away so often.
 

PotterChick958
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/06/09
I'm really glad to see Harry and Dudley getting on so well now that they are all grown up. It gives me hope for the real world and people getting over their childhood arguments once both parties grow up. Things change. People change. Harry's relationship with Dudley is a great representation of that.

Love, Amanda
Author Feedback: I wanted to explore that idea further as Rowling showed us a more grown-up Dudley a the beginning of book seven. I would have liked to have seen more of that.
 

PotterChick958
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/06/09
Very impressed with how Ron took his own break up in the middle of trying to deal with Ginny's. Hermione had great foresight to know to send Harry with Dudley on that night. I think it worked out much better that Harry wasn't around to deal with Ron.

Love, Amanda
Author Feedback: Very true, Hermione was able to reason with Ron if Harry had been there his focus would have been on Harry and things would have gotten bad before long.
 

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