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Vander
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 28/10/09
Fantastic story, one of the better post DH stories that I've seen. I have to say, I much much prefer your Epilogue over the abortion that was JKR's.
Author Feedback: I am glad that you enjoyed the story and I must say that I have heard JKR's epilogue to book seven referred to in many ways but never as an abortion. Anyways I am glad I was able to brighten things for you a bit. Happy Reading!
 

green-specks
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/10/09
my goodness that was fantastic... even though it was just the first chapter...

i love the way you describe each scene...

Author Feedback: Can't wait to hear what you think of the rest.
 

jonsamsch
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 02/10/09
i love this chap , i love how understanding ron was, your story is the best
Author Feedback: Thanks!
 

jonsamsch
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/10/09
i love your story, its wonderfull, and i like that you dont make it to mushy, and you follow along with thebook, i hate it when people write that harry was always in love with hermione because it was never in the book, but your story is awesome
Author Feedback: I was trying to make things realistic and tie in with what was already in the books and as it was the epilogue that I disliked the most it was the part I eliminated. I'm glad you approve so far.
 

mcsquared
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/09
What a wonderful beginning to what I am sure will be an amazing story. This story has come highly recommended and I look forward to reading the rest!
Author Feedback: I hope that you enjoy it and I look forward to hearing what you think of it.
 

PotterGranger
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 18/09/09
Hey Searcy,

I've been meaning to read your story for a while now, but real life keeps getting in the way. Anyway, after reading the entire story, I've to say, this fanfic really is worthy of the Elder Wand fanfiction competition award.

I've read so many stories, to say the least, but I never come across story in which the author put a lot of effort in writing Harry's relationship with his blood relatives. I love the mature Harry in this story. I also loved every detail you've put in regards to Harry and Hermione's feeling. Also, I'm glad that you've include Teddy into the equation.

DH wasn't my favorite book, and I completely erase the epilogue out of my Harry Potter knowledge inside my head. I'm not at all bias when I say that I love your epilogue much, much better. I'm really glad that J.K.Rowling didn't write anything about Harry and Ginny "re-bonding" in the last chapter before the epilogue. Your story could cover up all those stuff she come up with in the epilogue.

I applaud you for this wonderful story, and thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Author Feedback: Wel, all I can say is thank you after a review like that. I am pleased that you enjoyed the story so much.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/09/09
Yikes. Love this, I'm normally not a harry/hermione fan. You're doing this so well though.
Author Feedback: Well I am pleased that you like it so far.
 

q.thews
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 05/09/09
Nice story.
Even if you may have (or not) gave us a hint about Harry profession i really think this story lack in that area, even if in a passing comment knowing what career they choose would make them a little more real (you have a good characterization)... and don't come here saying that not even JKR revealed that ;-)
Ciao!
Author Feedback: I didn't realize that I hadn't hinted at Harry's profession and you are the first to mention it. Wow I guess I just assumed it was understood that he was an auror. Sorry for that and thanks for pointing it out to me.
 

q.thews
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/09/09
Thank you, thank you thank you.
Seeing them grow apart or even "enemies" would have been tragic, while this is "only" sad but in a nice way.... if this is the way it is going ;-)
Ciao!
Author Feedback: Glad you approve.
 

q.thews
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/09/09
I just hope we aren't going to see a fight with all (or part) of the Weasley family nor some Weasley bashing.
That said it is quite a nice start.
Author Feedback: I think you'll be pleased with how thins turn out.
 

Geans20
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/09
Awesome. I really enjoyed reading a story with a positive portrayal of a Dursley. It makes sense given how they parted ways in the 7th book. Very nice lead-up to their coupling!
Author Feedback: Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed the piece!
 

HarmonyLover
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 26/07/09
I enojoyed this story so much, particularly your characterization of the reformed Dudley. You always get the hint, at the beginning of DH, that he has the potential to become a decent person, and you really manage that here. I also like the way you re-worked the Epilogue into the ending - it's very cute and well done, and plausible given the relationships you've established. Thank you!
Author Feedback: Thank you for taking the time to read my story and to leave a review. I am glad to hear that you found the story plausible. I am also pleased that you like my characterization of Dudley. His portrayal in the final book made me wonder how he would have turned out if we could have seen more of his transformation.

I am glad you enjoyed the story and thank you again for taking the time to read and review.
 

)2oyal
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 20/07/09
Now that was just absolutely great!
Fantastic job with the detailed descriptions of Harry and Hermionie's feelings.

Definitely deserved first place in the competition!
Author Feedback: Thank you. I am happy to hear that you enjoyed the story and I appreciate your thinking it deserved to win. But I am still floored by the reception it received.
 

Caitlin
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 20/07/09
Oh my! Ginny handled that pretty well. Can\\\'t wait to see what\\\'s up next.
Author Feedback: I wnated to experiment with a kinder gentler Ginny or at the very least one who ones when to quit.
 

patsh
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 04/07/09
I've read this story probably a dozen times in the past six months or so, and it gets better every time. Your portrayal is exactly how I see Harry and Hermione in a non-epilogue, post Hogwarts setting. I also greatly enjoyed the growth of Dudley as a character, and his movement towards a person who actually has value in Harry's eyes.

The growth of all of your characters is treated very well, and I look forward to future re-reads. Thank you.
Author Feedback: I am happpy to know that this piece has been so well received by you and I hope that you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Until next time happy reading.
 

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