BlueFangSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 14/10/08
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/10/08
goodio goodio says the sailor guy of the magical land of cheem |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/10/08
whiped cream in chocolate sauce is good for the soul says i |
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this was a very sweet story... i love that harry's little girl got an owl that looked just like hedwig and even named her the french for hedwig... just like hermione...
waiting patiently for updates to your other stories...
candice |
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usako99Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 03/10/08
Good so far, I like the twist. Where Harry admits his feelings but Hermione isn't ready, it'll be interesting to see how she comes around and how thw Weasley's cope with the whole thing. A writer after my own heart, I love breaking up canon too!  |
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This was absolutely lovely! This is what Deathly Hallows *should* have been, only more amazing. I love everything about it, down to the names Ron and Luna gave their kids. 
I think my Portkey hiatus is over. Now I remember why I love this place. |
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I never get tired of reading this one, i think i've read it about six or seven times. it flows so nicely, and its not only realistic, but very true to the story, discounting the epilogue from hell lol. i love that you made up your own epilogue to counter it, though, with everything as it should be.
anyways, reading A Day At The Park is always a joy, and i hope you keep writing H/Hr stories for ever! |
Author Feedback: I felt it was only fair to give ths one a proper epilogue so to speak. I thank you for reading and reviewing and I am glad that you so enjoy this piece. Happy Reading! |
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Wow! That was AWESOME!! I don't think I've read a story of this caliber for a long time. This has to be one of my top favorite stories. Thank you for the wonderful job, I can easily see why this was the winner of the Elder Wand competition. |
Author Feedback: You are much too generous in your praise. I thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. |
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this is so awesome. i really really loved it!!!!keep it up!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/08
Very good so far but can you please let me read on with having to do tese silly things???? |
Author Feedback: Glad you are enjoying the story, thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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awe that's so cute... hahaha i love it
you're a wonderful author, i love your writing, keep it up
-megz- |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much for reading. |
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ShayUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 07/08/08
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Author Feedback: Originally this was set to be a one shot. However, the readers made their case and persuaded me to extend it into a full length fic. My intention was to go back and correct the ending of that first chapter but I never got around to it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.  |
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genvesselSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 29/07/08
and that, friends, is how that stupid epilogue SHOULD have read. geez.
excellent story. thanks so much and congrats on the win! |
Author Feedback: It would have been nice if things had really turned out that way wouldn't it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 25/07/08
Brilliant ending. A very good finale to an excellent story. Hopefully you'll recount the adventures of the newest owner of the Marauder's Map at some point. Nicely written |
Author Feedback: I hadn't thought of that but perhaps I will at some point. |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 25/07/08
A very good chapter. Well written and drawn. Amazing that the only person who can't accept things have changed is Molly. Nicely written. |
Author Feedback: I have always seen the intractability of the Weasley clan as coming from Molly rather than Arthur. |
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