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a lovely story that i really enjoyed reading i look forward to reading your other works |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/06/08
Oooh, Angsty. Can't believe they didn't get together before Ginny became pregnant. |
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I liked this story alot...
Strains belief a little but that's ok, we're all delusional anyway, right?
Good job.
From Iraq sincerely,
GM |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 09/11/07
The kiddies certainly reacted like kids do at that age, I'm glad they've settled all together well. Very nice story! |
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RachelUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/10/07
I'm not very clear on why they couldn't drop the Weasleys and be together. They didn't have to break up with them and rush into a relationship immediately. They could have just dropped a Weasley and then waited a respectable amount of time to save feelings. It's soo much better than carrying on a sham of a relationship for "noble" reasons.
It so sad it had to get to the point where Harry got Ginny pregnant. Harry can say Ginny did it on purpose, but the truth is it couldn't have happened without Harry being involved. He could have just refused.
Anyway, reading on, because I think the writing is good, but I'm not keen on the premise. |
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That was truly wonderful. I really needed that after DH. It's good to see Harry and Hermione get the happily ever after they deserve. |
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I enjoyed this story - granted the kids' living arrangements were a bit confusing. I still think that evil Ginny shouldn't have had a happy ending. But that's just me! Harmony forever! |
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Loved it. Actually, you're one of my favorite authors on Portkey-- you have a great style of writing, and it doesn't hurt that you seem to strive for that happy ending (I'm such a hopeless romantic). I think this is probably my favorite post-DH fic yet. Well done! |
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Aw, What a wonderful ending! Yaay for R/L, H/Hr, & Ginny/Richard. I'm glad you made James not be fully OK with everything. (It would be a bit too convenient if all the kids were 100% cool with all that happened.) I LOVED this story!! |
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Wow, What an explosive chapter! I can't believe Ron's low enough to think that just because he is either having an affair with or wants to have one with Luna, that that automatically means that Harry and Hermione are having an affair. Ginny is so darn annoying! I love how Rose was talking loudly in the hall to warn Hermione that Ginny was coming. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 17/09/07
it's so beatiful!! I like very much this fic, I want to reed you'r next fic, congratulation, you wrote excelent |
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HeidiHoSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 14/09/07
“I don’t see why we all have to meet Dick,” Albus complained loudly
Oh my god, that's a perfect line for a kid, particularly Albus. "Dick." Hilarious. Lovely story. I actually loved Deathly Hallows and didn't terribly mind the Epilogue, but that is mainly because I've come to rely on great fan fiction authors to get all sides of the Harry Potter universe. Jo Rowling may give us Harry and Ginny, but fan fiction is perfectly able to give us Harry and Hermione - I don't see anything wrong with that. Anyway, excellent story - I really enjoyed it. |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/09/07
I loved this story. I was hooked from the very first chapter. I think this is definitely one of the best fanfiction pieces that I've read in a long time.
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SydneyUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/09/07
Oh my goodness, this is a wonderful story. I was hooked from the first chapter and it was all just wonderful. Fantastic work! ^_^ |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 29/08/07
Whoa, I bet that Richard guy didn't get a single thing of their families, it's so bloody complicated, lol!
As for Ginny...she was a real cow, I instead really liked ron in this chapter. Actually, I liked him in most of the story, just his little outburst once he woke up wasn't so nice, but he got over it quite well, so... |
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