tepiestarSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 15/02/08
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The wedding was cute. I like how it was small and wonderful. I think the potion thing was funny. Great job on the story. I can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep Writing. Have a great valentine's day. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 14/02/08
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beautifully devious there you know that love the wedding and the pictures. Loved reading your tale |
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shika17Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 25/10/07
hahaha that scene with harry's ass is funny.cant wait for the next update |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 24/10/07
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what will happen next. |
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ahhhh that ending is do cute and so nice and ahhhhhhhhh i want a harry like that but gues just 4 a hile if it was these fluffy my life i would nt be right of the mind..............
any how loving the fact thatwe know a little bit about the future thanks to luna  plese keep up with these great fic |
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Ah great chapter can't wait to see what happens next in your tale especially the wedding and all. |
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tepiestarSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 23/10/07
my first thought was that it was a very mushy chapter. but i was just in a bad mood.  i like it now. kissing it all better was pretty cute. and then the proposal, with audience. except this audience wasn't because he's HARRY POTTER!, but because it was romantic, and we're all helpless romantics. i loved how luna ruined the surprise. although, i still think they could have lied to everyone else too. when celebrities do "surprise weddings" i think it's fun. mean to the guests (especially the closest ones), but fun. |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 23/10/07
Oh this is so cute! And I love how Harry, Hermione, Ron, Luna, Ginny, and Draco are all going to be related one day!! That is going to be soo sweet! I cant wait for the next chapter update! i hope that it is soon! |
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Hey! OMG so I just found this story and Ive spent the last 3 hours reading it lol. I thought it was awesome and I cant wait to read the last few chapters. I am a little concerned about Draco and Ginny tho. They always seems to be mad at eachother. Maybe you can have a scene where Draco makes everything up to Ginny? That would be nice as they are a favorite pairing of mine. Update again whenever you can and good luck with the second job. Until then, Byes  |
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cute cute cute. I can't wait to be able to read more, as always. Its good to be able to read this story so I can't wait!
*%* Susanna *%* |
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cute cute cute. I can't wait to be able to read more, as always. Its good to be able to read this story so I can't wait!
*%* Susanna *%* |
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ElysiumSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 22/10/07
This was a lovely addition to the story!
Harry proposing to Hermione like that was sweet. And so was his concern that she would think it was too soon. In any other relationship it would be, but Harry and Hermione have had years to slowly develope their relationship. They have been close friends since part way through their first year and have experienced unspeakable horrors and rushing triumphs at each other's side.
I'm glad that you had Hermione having a nightmare about the attack. I know it seems aweful, but it lets the readers know that she doesn't see herself as invulnerable and that the attack affected her a great deal more than she let show on the surface. As logical and practical as our Hermione can be, even she can't bring her subconscious completely under control and that was nice to see.
I hope you are feeling better after you r cold, and best of luck with the second job (that is going to be just as taxing on your health as well as your time).
Take care of yourself too!
Ely |
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