Now that was a much better epilogue than any others that could have been written. Well done, hun.

"But, hey! All was well!"

Ha, love that ending. I could definitely see Ron and Luna being like that...having all those kids. What with Luna being an only child, and only having her dad after her mom died, I would think she would want a nice, big family. And nothing beats all my favorite pairings being present in this epilogue. I kinda miss Teddy and Draco though, but I think this works just as well without them. I wonder though why Bilius wanted to avoid John like the plague? Probably cause he made like his father and tread lightly around know-it-alls...it looked that way to me at least. Amusing none the less. Thanks for writing this.

I loved it. It was adorable and sweet.
Better then JKR's anyways...

"Ron winced, as most of the advice was directed to his ear. "Luna, love, if you're going to yell, don't do it in my direction," he muttered, rubbing his ear." haha that was aweomse great job reallyyy well done, i love it.

I must say I liked your version better it hooked up all my favorite couples, and I must say better names than Hugo and Scorpio......Scorpio honestly lol GREAT ONE

Ron laughed loudly, and slapped Harry on the back, almost making him fall over. "He's just like Hermione, that one. Mental!"
"Ron!" Hermione exclaimed, glaring at her best friend. "Don't call your godson mental! And much less me!" But he ignored her, much to her dismay, and kept chuckling to himself.

LOL so cute had many good laughs. BRILLIANT!

that was great. "Not again" I like. Nice job definitely how it should've been.

Alex

Awesome!!! The kids' names are great, Luna's announcement made me laugh out loud (as did the kids' reactions to it), and it was just an enjoyable, funny way to end the series! All in favor of ripping out the crapilogue and inserting this one? Aye!

Greetings from a fellow delusional Red Mooner.

lol cute! i loved the line about them not having another kid...classic. great job!

Aw, That was so cute! It was definitely WAY BETTER than the crapalogue JK wrote!

Okay - this is actually much better than the crappy one by JKR. Atleast there were interactions between the people. What was missing is political / social things and mentions of Draco / Lupin families. It's actually very good without them. Are you going to write more ? Even without them it's a great bit of writing. It seemed more "real" and more like what people should really expect

Haha, this was kind of sweet and funny.

Although, I'm not too sure about the Bilius part though, but that's just me. Great job overall!

Oh this was so good. Now why couldn't it have been the real epilogue? Huh? Why? *stops self before rant begins* As I was saying, funny and cute, perfect.

lol, that was great, absolutely fantastic. I am glad to see that in spite of the disaster that was DH all the Harmonians seem to be taking it in stride and writing there own ending.

Hahaha, I love the ending bit with all the kids. That just seems like such a Ron sort of style to come in and send his kids off. I like your epilogue far more than Rowling's (growls).