You\'ve made a fine start here, and I\'m interested enough to want to follow your story. Just, in the future, please don\'t threaten us, your readers, to get reviews.
Either write, or don\'t, but don\'t turn into a review junkie. Your writing is good enough to stand up on its own. Don\'t cheapen that, okay?  |
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You've made a fine start here, and I'm interested enough to want to follow your story. Just, in the future, please don't threaten us, your readers, to get reviews.
Either write, or don't, but don't turn into a review junkie. Your writing is good enough to stand up on its own. Don't cheapen that, okay? |
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Hello there
greart chapter
You had me confused with the last sentance for a second I at first thought McGonogal said it
Are Harry and Hermione gonna be like HB and HG or something or needed for protection?
The dream was a nice touch
and the scene when mr dursley was about to hit him and he was like ha i can curse you
PS Cant wait for more
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Author Feedback: thanx for the compliments! i hope you figured out who said the last sentence.
ull have to wait to c why harry and hermione r gonna b needed.
ill be posting more soon...maybe in a day or two.
thanx again
mg2090 |
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I do like it so far. Just what are they at Hogwarts for? I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
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Like it so far. I wonder who the mysterious voice will be....? *Gasp* |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/07/07
good but you are done after this awh please go on its good so far. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/07/07
i think this a good start. i like it alot. please update soon |
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oh i hope you dont give up on this story. i really would like to see how you write your version of the hunt and voldemorts defeat. |
Author Feedback: thanx a lot! i hav ch 1-8 written already so you can atleast expect that. and i didn't mean to sound that pessimistic about abandoning the story. MOST PROBABLY, it will be completed.
thanx again
mg2090 |
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