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Hermione'sMyAlterEgo
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 26/07/07
Okay, I have reviewed for every single chapter of this story, and your begging is starting to piss me off. Everybody understands that you want reviews, but the pleading is tiresome. To tell you the truth, most people don't review when chapters are this short because not a lot to comment on has transpired. I promise that the longer your chapters are, the more reviews you'll get. Quite aside from that, I like this story, I really do. Why is Harry having deja vu? And I like the Christmas invite, that was nice.
 

Janus_R_Potter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/07/07
"The list 'people dead because Voldemort wants Harry Potter'"...hmm,I can't put my finger on it but something about that sounds very wrong.
 

timeturner02
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 26/07/07
Hello there

another grat chapter they just keep piling up

Harry is so sweat when he said he would do anything to protect her

Mrs Granger is good the linked hands, them looking good together, and the he loves you alot she obviously loves our pairing

Hermiones excitement was so contagious you coulkd almost feel it and this story seems so real like im there practically

PS Cant wait for more
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 26/07/07
ALL authors get substantially more hits than they do reviews. It's the nature of fan fiction. Begging for reviews comes across as desperate and usually falls on deaf ears anyway. There are those that will review, and those that won't- no matter how much you ask. You just have to learn to live with it.

I'm no trying to offend, but that's just the way it is.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 26/07/07
i liked how harry said he would protect hermione it was very sweet. update soon
 

potterfan
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/07/07
Great update. I like this chapter the best. The amount of detail in this chapter is a lot more and better that the first 2.

I am curious how Harry will be able to teach 7th year students if he never learned the material in the first place.
Author Feedback: harry's the best dada student in the eyar and he has shown from the potions book that he can learn it all by himself...with hermione helping a bit of course
 

pstibbons
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/07/07
Good - hope the Worrying What Ron Thinks shit ends soon.

How is Snape not affected by the Unbreakable Vow? Or do you just plan to pretend it wasnt such a Vow? (That's fine with me, btw.)
Author Feedback: i think im going to assume that there is no vow...just for simplicity's sake. thanx for the review!
mg2090
 

Hermione'sMyAlterEgo
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/07/07
Okay, I think I like where this is going. Dumbledore is alive. Interesting. Good way to have Harry meet the parents, too. I know you said you would eventually, but please make the chapters longer.
 

morriganscrow
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/07/07
A fine and interesting chapter. This continues to be an excellent story and I'm keen to read all future updates.
 

Naeryn
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/07/07
Interesting premise... I'd like to see where you're taking this, as I rather assume you aren't going to stick very close (if at all) to DH.
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/07/07
Heh, and the plot deepens, as does the relationship 'tween Harry & Hermione. This is one of the better "Dumbledore didn't die" works I've read, or at least one of the least mapiulative!Dumbledore ones. *grin* It will be interesting to see how Ron takes the varied bits of news. Frankly, I've still got a few concerns about telling him, for that matter, I've a few concerns about Hagrid knowing as both he and Ron are "flannelmouths" under the right conditions who don't stop to think what they're saying and who might be around to hear them.
 

timeturner02
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/07/07
Hello there

AWWWH so fluffy at the end Hermione thinking Harry was being selfless it was cute

hehe since there working together even more fully they wont be able to resist do they get those Head Boy Head Girl dorms that seem to be quite the cliche even though there could very well be said dorms

PS Cant wait for more
Author Feedback: hehe...thanks for the awesome review!
im not sure about the dorms tho...im still considering it.
nyway...ch-4 shud b posted 2morrow until then i wud love it if you checked out my other 2 stories..even tho they r a bit angsty.
thanx again
mg2090
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 25/07/07
Hmm, again a most interesting ending to a chapter. I like the way that both Harry & Hermione are reacting to each other, it says a lot about the relationship between them.

Oh, one minor typo needs fixing, about the middle of the chapter, "... aspirating ..." needs to be "... apparating ...". It appears auto-sell check got you.
Author Feedback: thanx for the review! the h/hr chemistry has just started and thanx for pointing out the typo. yeah, its times like these i hate auto spell-check.
thanx once again
mg2090.
PS: ch-3 is out
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/07
Hmm, an interesting start as it's clear his real support is with Hermione. I do have to admit that the ending definitely leaves me curious. I do think Harry would be better off wearing that medallion that putting it in his trunk, but he'll learn. You've a good start here.
 

Hermione'sMyAlterEgo
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/07/07
I really like this story, but I think that your chapter are too short. You sould try to make them longer.
 

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